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As the wind blows
Through the cold winter air
Even though I'm alone
I know you're still here
With me through the good
With me through the bad 
You can make me smile
Even when I'm sad
I'm happy to have you
Here in my life
Hopefully soon......
You’ll become my wife
All I will ever need, 
in this world 
Is for you to be my girl
And me to be your guy
Together we can make 
Our dreams come true
If you are with me
And I’m with you...
I love when were together
And I hate when we're apart
Even though you're far away
You’re always in my heart

-Lorenzo Carty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 7:43:00 PM
I love your poem Lorenzo...An interesting thing: My wife's great grandfather was named Lorenzo and he was a Cherokee Chief...Thought of this when I saw your name...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:17:00 PM
Nice and subtle Lorenzo, great job...Raul
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