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As the wind blows Through the cold winter air Even though I'm alone I know you're still here With me through the good With me through the bad You can make me smile Even when I'm sad I'm happy to have you Here in my life Hopefully soon...... You’ll become my wife All I will ever need, in this world Is for you to be my girl And me to be your guy Together we can make Our dreams come true If you are with me And I’m with you... I love when were together And I hate when we're apart Even though you're far away You’re always in my heart -Lorenzo Carty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 7:43:00 PM
I love your poem Lorenzo...An interesting thing: My wife's great grandfather was named Lorenzo and he was a Cherokee Chief...Thought of this when I saw your name...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:17:00 PM
Nice and subtle Lorenzo, great job...Raul
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