My Guardian Angel

I, a stranger here in this unknown place a swarm of new faces moving at their own paces In the wandering crowd lost as i was their came piercing a ray of hope, blinding an inspiration, a support a guardian angel so sweet brimming with love potion spreading an aura of compassion her sufferings hidden by a mask of sweet smile that brighten my day with love immense to share and a heart that care she extended her hand prodding me to thrive led me through the hurdles paving way to success my second mother always close to my heart shining with a brilliance that can hush the stars. © (14 Jan '15) Dedicated to my lecturer Ms. Sonia Karkera * Honorable mention in the contest 'How you make the stars hush' by Justin Bordner on 13 March 2015
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March 14, 2015 at 3:49 AM
A beautiful dedication to this special woman in your life, dear Nad!...congrats and hugs, Rhonda
Relish Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:29 AM
Thank you dear Rhonda .. hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 5:15 PM
truly deep touching beautiful angel nad who will forever and always shine in the heart excellent pen flowing golden ink
Relish Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Liam... your comments are always a pleasure to read... Nad
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Nadiya, I have read all your poems listed this morning.. Don't have a lot of time this morning.. I feel this lovely tribute and Stand by Me are about the same person.?... I absolutely adore your writings.. Very heartfelt and wonderful imagery and incredible vocabulary... Adding you to my favorite poets so I may comment on other poes and read more as time permits... Hugs, new friend... Arlene
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January 17, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Arlene my friend... My pleasure that you took time to read all my poems... As you said both the poems are a bit similar... But 'stand by you' is about any person who is close to his mother, who tries to see her in his wife... I wrote it this morning for the contest... Very happy that you will be commenting on my writings... Please do correct me as well... Lov n hugs...nadiya
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 4:29 PM
A lovely tribute to her....hugs Tim
Relish Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thank you Tim... she is a beloved teacher and my inspiration... hugs
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