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My Green Honda

Past winters were extremely harsh and driving my green Honda was tough; it's certainly not a luxury car... whenever I go, it gets me far. Once it broke down in a parking lot near Kennedy International Airport; and I lost a good day's work by making me feel like a real jerk! The check light came on, it needed repairs immediately... do you know how much it cost me? Almost a thousands dollars, plus the headache it gave me! But until now it has run perfectly! I hate riding my green Honda in the evening breeze when the pollen from the trees make me sneeze; I should close my sunroof, roll up all windows... but I wouldn't be racing with the warm wind like cowboys! Written by Andrew Crisci for Brown Carol's contest, " My First Car "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/13/2012 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:45:00 PM
congrats Andrew on a grand first place win for this spectacular entry luv..
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:26:00 PM
ride on :) ~N
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