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My Greatest Moment

Author: Fernando Lachica Poem: My Greatest Moment My heart keeps beating My mind keeps thinking Never to surrender Never to give up Even in a sparkle of hope I struggled to reach Approaching the web of chance Hoping to be there Wrap my life endlessly In the eternal glory The strength of my being Released a beam of hope Emitting in every direction To where I belong I savor the moment Capturing every drop of joy Sipping into my elusive soul Shouting.... This is the moment! My greatest moment!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 11:53:00 AM
wow, I wish I could do that with every moment..loved this line "Approaching the web of chance" Light & Love
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:41:00 AM
Good for you. We all long for those "greatest moments". What an uplifting piece so filled with hope. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 5/12/2009 1:30:00 PM
and more to come I hope for you Fernando.... cool poem my friend
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:32:00 AM
VERY TOUCHING BROTHER AND MOVING I ENJOY YOUR WRITING KEEP IT GOING
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