My Greatest Moment

Author:  Fernando Lachica

Poem:  My Greatest Moment



My heart keeps beating
My mind keeps thinking
Never to surrender
Never to give up
Even in a sparkle of hope
I struggled to reach
Approaching the web of chance
Hoping to be there
Wrap my life endlessly
In the eternal glory
The strength of my being
Released a beam of hope
Emitting in every direction
To where I belong
I savor the moment
Capturing every drop of joy
Sipping into my elusive soul
Shouting....

This is the moment!

My greatest moment!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 11:53 AM
wow, I wish I could do that with every moment..loved this line "Approaching the web of chance" Light & Love
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May 14, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Good for you. We all long for those "greatest moments". What an uplifting piece so filled with hope. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
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May 12, 2009 at 1:30 PM
and more to come I hope for you Fernando.... cool poem my friend
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May 12, 2009 at 7:32 AM
VERY TOUCHING BROTHER AND MOVING I ENJOY YOUR WRITING KEEP IT GOING
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