Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

My Greatest Fear

My greatest fear would be
to lose you my dear.
So intertwined are we,
I cannot see
a life without thee.

Bonded were we before 
you were even born.
I remember that morn.
Your little eyes half open.
Your mouth seeking my breast.

As you lay on my chest.
My heart filled with love.
Heavenly child from above.
Deep connections were made
Emotional bond so strong.

I'm thrilled you came along.
To give me strength to carry on.
The meaning of unconditional love
You revealed to me my sweet.
So grateful that we should meet.

My greatest fear would be
to lose you my dear.
So intertwined are we
I cannot see
a life without thee.

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Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 1:08 PM Dropping back with my congrats Jean - I really can relate to this poem my friend:-( hugs Jan xx Jean Murray October 12, 2016 at 2:33 PM Thank you Jan. That feeling is hard to beat, when our offspring we meet.

Teddy Kimathi October 12, 2016 at 8:48 AM A very deep, emotional piece.... Congrats Jean, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Jean Murray October 12, 2016 at 11:44 AM Thank you Teddy. My daughters can always make me dig deep.

Lewis Raynes October 11, 2016 at 8:10 PM Great write here Jean, congrates on ur win in the contest Lewis Raynes October 12, 2016 at 1:18 PM Lol. Its in ur back pocket. Jean Murray October 12, 2016 at 3:44 AM Thank you Lewis. My greatest fear at the moment is that I have lost my mojo. You haven't seen it have you?

Just James June 26, 2016 at 1:57 PM Wonderful write...great contest result! Congrats Jean Murray June 26, 2016 at 5:21 PM Thank you James.

Kim Rodrigues June 25, 2016 at 6:44 PM Very nice, Jean! Jean Murray June 26, 2016 at 1:16 AM Thank you Kim.

Sandra Haight June 25, 2016 at 5:36 PM Very heartfelt and beautiful, and every mom's worst fear, Jean. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, SAndra Jean Murray June 25, 2016 at 5:41 PM Thank you Sandra.

Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 3:56 PM I wrote of my fear of losing my marbles but my other greatest fear is to lose my son:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Jean Murray June 25, 2016 at 5:40 PM Thank you Jan.

Beautiful Scars June 25, 2016 at 3:07 PM Jean, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Jean Murray June 25, 2016 at 3:14 PM Luloo, I have tears in my eyes. My Precious and I don't always see eye to eye. So I had not shown her this poem. But after this wonderful win, I had to recite it to her just now. She tried hard not to smile, but by the end, could not help herself and thanked me. So...Thank you!!

Daniel Turner June 24, 2016 at 5:34 PM Every parents worst fear is to lose their child, I think. Sexy belly! Jean Murray June 25, 2016 at 4:45 AM Daniel, how can that belly be sexy??

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2016 at 2:15 PM - Beautiful written, Jean - You look nice with baby belly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray June 24, 2016 at 2:28 PM You sweet talker you Anne-Lise!!