My Greatest Fear

Your life is mine and mine is yours, we share our secrets and find our course.

When I see you I cant help but smile
You are my happiness and keep me here for a little while
But when your not here, I shed a tear, for losing my best friend is
My greatest fear.

If only you could understand, that when i hold you hand
everything tends to sparkle and shine

Until the end of time, I'll be yours if you'll be mine
In the depths of our hearts is a feeling so divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anderson Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Thanks very much everybody :) x
Eggins Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:19 AM
nice poem for a friend I thought it lovely sentiment love Jayne
Carr Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 7:28 PM
I can totally understand this .. Very good
A  Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 6:23 PM
HOW SWEET, A FEAR SOME DO INTEND TO ENCOUNTER, SCARY AT TIMES
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