My Good Memories As a Boy

Little girls are shown off simply for being pretty.
Though little boys are just as handsome
as girls are pretty,
boys are in a rut--- but,
they learn how to strut.
They teeter, they totter, they swagger.
They pee farther and straighter
as they prove by completion
of healthy competition. 
They drag off to fishin’,
wishin’
someone else were there to bait the hook.
They brag to kingdom come
about how big was one that took
the bait and then was lost
and no one can prove them wrong.
The name and fame of their toys….
Why it’s an official Daisy Red  Ryder Bullseye shootin
bb rifle—made especially for boys!!!
The kind that will shoot your eye out,
if you’re not careful and
learn to use that gun as a tool, not a toy.  
Yes, little boys!
The only thing to change as they age
are the size and cost of their toys.
and the duration
of competition.  

© 28 Dec 2010  Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Duffin Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Hi Charles. congratulations on your deserved success in the contest with this fine piece. Eamon
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December 30, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Crystal Wilkin's contest. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 8:56 PM
congrats on your well deserved win in the contest Charles
Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Charles, this is a very fine write and great read. You have a good sense of humour and boys/men summed up to perfection in this lovely poem:))
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December 29, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Charles! Enjoy! Blessings, peace, joy and happiness from my home to yours for the coming New Year and always, Audrey
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December 29, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Congrats Charles on your super big win in the Childhood Memories contest with this exceptional entry and write my friend.. enjoyable and entertaining piece with luv..
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