Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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My Golden Sun

Roll and roll along, my golden sun,
for with this sweet bright day you gifted me,
my heart and soul forever you have won.

My love and I leave footprints by the sea.
Roll and roll along, my golden sun
and keep my true love golden next to me.

Yes, roll and roll along, my golden sun.
I want for you to ever roll along.
Roll on and never let this day be done!

March 26, 2020
Gif #4
for Carolyn Devonshire's '"Footprints" Old or New for a Prize' Contest

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Sam Kauffman May 6, 2021 at 9:31 AM So hard to let go of those perfect days. We just want to hold onto every moment. I like the repetition of the theme phrase. It gives the sense of the movement of the sun crossing the sky. Congrats, again, my friend!

Christuraj Alex May 4, 2021 at 10:27 AM Simple and Sweet!

Unseeking Seeker May 4, 2021 at 8:35 AM You never cease to amaze, Andrea! Congrats on your win!

Carolyn Devonshire May 4, 2021 at 8:02 AM A lovely poem, Andrea. Although repeating lines are not usually appealing to me, I think you did a fine job with the theme. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Paris-Maree Boreham May 4, 2021 at 7:44 AM roll roll roll along your words to me are like a song <3 Beautiful write Andrea and WOW HELLO Your picture is moving :O =D CONGRATULATIONS on your win !!

Sam Kauffman April 11, 2020 at 1:19 PM Rolling, rolling, rolling! Keep those words a rolling! Back to say congratulations on yet another win as this poem "rolls" along! Enjoyed it the first time - enjoyed the journey again! Happy Easter my friend! Paris-Maree Boreham May 4, 2021 at 7:46 AM hahahaa Sam I read the poem musically also, then I saw your comment musically hahahaa =D

Greg Gaul April 11, 2020 at 12:13 PM So simple a verse but so engaging too at any level. No hint of pretense, just honest words rolling along. Rolling and rolling you are inexhaustible in new poetry. Congratulations on wonderful poem.

Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2020 at 2:37 PM Congratulations on your win. The beach is a special place. I love the picture with your poem. Have a wonderful day.........

Sam Kauffman April 1, 2020 at 11:25 PM Andrea, congratulations on your first place win! Love the use of the repeating refrain. Gives the poem its tempo and flowing feeling!

John Watt April 1, 2020 at 5:17 PM Andrea, an EXCELLENT poem rewarded with an excellent and well-deserved #1 placement. Congrats to you ~ John

Edward Ibeh April 1, 2020 at 4:45 PM Wonderfully written poem, Andrea:-) Congratulations on your top win!

William Kelii Kekaula April 1, 2020 at 4:03 PM Delightfully simple, Andrea, liken to its gif, it rolls on, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William

Lindsay Laurie March 30, 2020 at 10:07 PM Hello Andrea … where would we be without our guiding light that offers so much for us - thanks Andrea - Lindsay

Mark Peterson March 28, 2020 at 3:13 PM Nice little vignette personifying such elegant delight as gamboling away a few precious hours in mild sunlight by the sea. Each day a gift we're meant to use with purpose and not infrequently a bit of playful mirth.

John Watt March 27, 2020 at 12:21 PM Ah, the sun and the sea and a golden sky and your love by your side... who wouldn't want a day like that to last forever? Wonderful flow and a lovely gif to warm the scene. Love it, and congrats on your win! Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2020 at 1:02 PM it did not win anything I am aware of, John. His contest is still going on. Which Gif did YOu choose for that contest?

Vijay Pandit March 27, 2020 at 8:10 AM I like the happy tone of your poem Andrea...well done, indeed!

Joanna Daniel March 27, 2020 at 2:41 AM Simple and excellent at the same time, Andrea:)

Jenish Somadas March 27, 2020 at 1:17 AM Wonderful rhyme Andrea.. The imagery of the golden sun is brightening my day.. But let your golden son play inside..Be safe..

Quoth Theraven March 26, 2020 at 11:29 PM Andrea, Scratch a poet and you may find a dreamer's best dream. -Richard