My God Pome

All the things i've come to bleed for in the past
childhood held hopes that where never ment to last
my inosence long since sinned away
carrying the crossafix i'll hang from it's my grave

but your beleafs be long to you 
in the end will they hold true
when refelcting on the life you've lead 
and all the tears you've dread to shead

and when you find your lost in thought
contemplating all you not
the promised bliss of ignorince
whats my stance on gods apscence
did he send his son as our savior
are we the betrayer 
blessed but still damned by free will

not to force thoughts apawn you 
simply to remind you 
there are other points of view
so as you deside please keep in mind
these are my revalations revealed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/15/2016 1:04:00 PM
christopher c.,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:24:00 PM
Christopher, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 11/6/2009 6:10:00 PM
this is such a wonderful and true poem. but we must keep in mind that by being better people than we are now, we can get to Heaven :) -------Ell
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Date: 11/6/2009 6:05:00 PM
Certainly we were cursed by our own mind dominated choice, Christopher. But now we can make another choice through Christ. Sincerely, Moses
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