My Girl

She strikes my heart like a finger on a gutair string
She makes me feel like a million bucks 
She is fantastic

She brightens up my world
I don't know what i would do without her
She is amazing

Her lips soft to the touch
She grabs my hand and makes me tingle
She is the best

She is my best friend
She is my girlfriend 
Samantha

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Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 3/9/2012 3:22:00 PM

Nicely written Mike. I know those emotions too, therefore I can dig it.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/27/2011 6:37:00 PM

She is your sunshine on a cloudy day. - JH

Dana Smith

Date: 10/22/2011 6:00:00 PM

You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care

Mike Williams
Date: 10/22/2011 6:06:00 PM

thank u

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2011 12:56:00 AM

YOUR PERFECT MATCH... ENJOYED,..LINDA

Mike Williams
Date: 6/22/2012 7:43:00 PM

though apparently not perfect match

Mike Williams
Date: 10/9/2011 10:57:00 AM

glad u enjoyed it

Mike Williams
Date: 10/9/2011 10:56:00 AM

thanks linda:) i feel the same way. It has been 6 years yesterday

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2011 3:31:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry soup, another fellow Canadian. You will enjoy the site, try some contests. Look forward to reading more of your poems. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 10:47:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Mike. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol