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My Girl

She strikes my heart like a finger on a gutair string She makes me feel like a million bucks She is fantastic She brightens up my world I don't know what i would do without her She is amazing Her lips soft to the touch She grabs my hand and makes me tingle She is the best She is my best friend She is my girlfriend Samantha

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Date: 3/9/2012 3:22:00 PM
Nicely written Mike. I know those emotions too, therefore I can dig it.
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Date: 11/27/2011 6:37:00 PM
She is your sunshine on a cloudy day. - JH
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Date: 10/22/2011 6:00:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
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Mike Williams
Date: 10/22/2011 6:06:00 PM
thank u
Date: 10/9/2011 12:56:00 AM
YOUR PERFECT MATCH... ENJOYED,..LINDA
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Mike Williams
Date: 6/22/2012 7:43:00 PM
though apparently not perfect match
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Mike Williams
Date: 10/9/2011 10:57:00 AM
glad u enjoyed it
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Mike Williams
Date: 10/9/2011 10:56:00 AM
thanks linda:) i feel the same way. It has been 6 years yesterday
Date: 10/8/2011 3:31:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup, another fellow Canadian. You will enjoy the site, try some contests. Look forward to reading more of your poems. Lee
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:47:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Mike. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:01:00 AM
Ya gotta love your woman. No one else can make you feel the way she does. :-)
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