My Girl

She strikes my heart like a finger on a gutair string
She makes me feel like a million bucks 
She is fantastic

She brightens up my world
I don't know what i would do without her
She is amazing

Her lips soft to the touch
She grabs my hand and makes me tingle
She is the best

She is my best friend
She is my girlfriend 
Samantha
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mitchell Jr. Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Nicely written Mike. I know those emotions too, therefore I can dig it.
J.T. Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 6:37 PM
She is your sunshine on a cloudy day. - JH
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 6:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
Williams Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 6:06 PM
thank u
A   Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:56 AM
YOUR PERFECT MATCH... ENJOYED,..LINDA
Williams Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 7:43 PM
though apparently not perfect match
Williams Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:57 AM
glad u enjoyed it
Williams Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:56 AM
thanks linda:) i feel the same way. It has been 6 years yesterday
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup, another fellow Canadian. You will enjoy the site, try some contests. Look forward to reading more of your poems. Lee
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:47 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Mike. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Pritts Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:01 AM
Ya gotta love your woman. No one else can make you feel the way she does. :-)
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