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My Girl

precious little face like its made of porceline pretty little curls like chains of golden rings wide beautiful eyes open to all they see my perfect english rose skin of china eyes blue green the sweetest funniest laugh as she giggles infectiously tiny little girl, so slender, so sleek thats my millie jayne and she is my living dream. sjeg

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Date: 4/21/2009 4:55:00 PM
beautiful tribute... thank you also for your warm comments on my poetry. Have a blessed weekend.
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:24:00 PM
This is very sweet Sally. The rhythm works very well, like the way you pace your words with interspersed commas, 'tiny little girl, so slender, so sleek'. I can almost hear her laughing as I read this. Very powerful imagery and hints strongly at the love that drives it. I don't have any kids yet but once I do I'll probably resonate with this language tenfold:) -Yoni
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