My Garden and the Spring

It is spring in my garden
roses are blooming
cuckoos are crying
The winter has been passed
summer is coming
It is so easy to write a poem in the spring
when the river flows gently to the sea
when the sakura shines 
in the moonlit night.
Honey-bee dances in my garden
because it is spring
Flowers spreading sweet smell 
in the cloudless blue sky
Could you imagine a garden 
in the moonlit night of a spring
It can make a poem of love 
It can open all the windows of your mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 2:24 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win,
A  Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Mohammad, Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~
Abedin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:27 PM
thanks
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Very nice, an amalgimation of three of the others I have read.
Austin Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 10:36 AM
This one really dances. Love it. Congrats on the selection. daver
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:46 PM
I welcome your nice comments. Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Beautiful imagery in yours. A very nice one. Congrats for your well deserved win.
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:47 PM
A nice comment. Thanks.
Guzzi Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 6:14 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Christmas Eve. Light & Love
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:48 PM
A happy comment. Thanks.
Oyewole Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:45 AM
Big congrats to you, Muhammad.
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Many thanks.
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:34 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Mohammad
May Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 5:51 PM
congrats on your win
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Many thanks.
Phookan Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 1:53 PM
Congrats Abedin on your wonderful win in this contest. Yours is one of those beautiful and simple poems, which I like so much. It's deeply engaging. Very picturesque, loved your spring garden! Thank you so much for your participation,, G
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Many many thanks.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Yeah spring is charming inspiring and so is yor poem. U write excellent. Pls do coment my latest poem too.
Abedin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Thanks for your comments.
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