My Future Love

ur love is like the ocean,
and i wanna take a splash.
and hopefully drench,
everything in my past.
feeling like the hearts in the cartoon,
into your love enriched cacoon.
Babygirl your like a star,
and im shootin for you first.
trying to kill that single status,
and hopefully put it in the hurst.
because u want a man,
Who can rid u of your curse.
im like superman,
with the tights and the cap.
who saves u for the moment,
and makes everything great.
Take u away from the pain,
and scrape them off your plate.
maybe we can cuddle and watch a movie,
Or jus go out on a date.
But im checking for you,
Like a reflection in the mirror.
u hear people talking,
but i don't hear them.
because it's like time stops,
everytime you talk.
I can't breathe,
and im in shock.
to be in your presence,
its like the greatest present.
with eyes like a magnet,
everytime i look its like im attracted.
Me and you, 
are like a dream.
But i can no longer redeem,
that feelings that seem.
To not go away,
or even turn or sway.
Ur the best and i see you in the sky,
and i keep falling because your so high.
impossible to reach your peak,
because the hill is too steep.
But im playing to win,
i can't stop u from the cheat.
so im gonna to keep trying and sit back in my seat,
descrbining what you make me feel on this sheet.
and maybe one day i could tell u,
all the things i would do.
Because ur on my mind all day,
and i can't stop wanting you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/12/2009 4:36:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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