My Friend

You shelter me through tempest storms – indeed, you are my friend.

You never try to change my ways, instead you interblend;
I’m free with you and you with me, and neither will offend.

In spite of fashion's etiquette, your care does not depend
on ways I dress (or part my hair) - I’m not a passing trend,
and in my need you comfort me till twists and turns unbend.

We needn’t don thin masks of clay or otherwise pretend,
and when I sometimes act the fool you never condescend
but try instead to steep my views in eyes that comprehend.

At times I dwell within the depths, you smile and I ascend
to levels of tranquillity which others can’t transcend.

You never ask, demand or take, you give and understand,
and when I’m lost, a frantic child, you lead me by the hand
through castle gates in mirrored walls throughout a fairyland 
where fears and worries linger less than tracks in drifting sand.

With you my words are ever free, they trickle out unplanned,
and fearful feelings I possess you seize as contraband.

Your laughter flows upon my woes like waves on troubled strand
which leave behind within their wake a calm and peaceful land.

Not everyone is pleased, I’m told, that you and I are friends.
The world outside... they envy us... that you and I are friends.
We dare defy the green-eyed storm... for you and I are friends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/23/2013 4:43:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem of friendship. There is nothing like having a fiend you can trust and likes you for who you are. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:34:00 AM
Another deep-reaching poem. Your poems are always so illuminating. They are always a joy to read. Excellent work
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:53:00 AM
Terry. An ode to BFF (I could not resist although I hate those acronyms). You speak eloquently of trust at its height. I was entranced, happy, grateful and teary reading this. love, Kathy
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Date: 6/4/2012 6:15:00 PM
It's hard to find more than one of these in life and exactly what a true friend should be. You have done a great job of writing this..... Huggs TLee
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:27:00 PM
and Terry,I don't know you too well yet,but I bet you can write a haiku.
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Date: 6/1/2012 11:26:00 AM
Oh WoW!!! Love it! What a wonderful tribute to a true friend....Tanya
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Date: 5/31/2012 4:30:00 PM
this is a beautiful tribute to your friend. i usually don't like rhyming poems which repeat the same sound over and over (monorhyme?) but you've done an amazing job and may have changed my mind about this.
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:41:00 PM
great work terry sorry i havent been reading poems recntly things are askew at the moment but i love this poem5*
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Date: 5/31/2012 2:23:00 AM
honest-to-goodness write, terry.. you slay me!.. wow...:) hugggs!
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:42:00 AM
Terry, well said, really good friends are hard to come by..David
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:39:00 PM
Wonderful to have a friend like this. I think I have a few of these myself and they mean everything, Terry!!!
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