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My Forever Girl

My Forever Girl. (Song) . The earth suddenly spun in the opposite direction And my world turned upside down I was floating high on a cloud of elation Although my feet were still on the ground . And the rain kept on pouring But there was sunshine was in my heart Because out of the blue Came you And the magic flowed Right from the start . Never knew love like this The prettiest girl in the world With the sweetest kiss . You are my everything You make my heart sing When I’m with you You make me Feel like a king I reach for the sky I swear I could fly I see eternity In your eyes . I was a loner window shopping Without a penny to buy Many a night all alone Drank till my bottles were dry Too many pretenders I was just a stepping stone But I never knew why Sometimes the world was a cold dark place And I just wanted to die . Out of the blue came you Like I hoped you’d do I guess I was in the right place at the right time The only one who understands me honey it’s true You woke something in me no other could see And made a man of my inner child . Wanna grow old with you no other will do . You are my everything You make my heart sing When I’m with you You make me Feel like a king I reach for the sky I swear I could fly I see eternity In your eyes . In you I found my paradise. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 11/13/2020 11:28:00 AM
I absolutely adore this song. Sooth the melody in harmony... Enchantingly romantic! I’m a gypsy for romantic poems :) :) I love love love this poem :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/13/2020 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Akkina. So appreciate you stopping by. I'm a hopeless uncurable romantic too. I wrote a book, ''The alchemy of love and romance'', some years ago. I look forward to reading your wordsTake care.
Date: 11/4/2020 4:21:00 PM
Hello Peter Dome, this is so romantic.I can feel the love as I read through this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/8/2020 3:05:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Always a pleasure. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. Take care X
Date: 10/27/2020 10:21:00 PM
Wow, love this, Peter the flow and the rhythm, and your wonderful lyrics makes for amazing poetry...
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/28/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry. I'm humbled by your kind words. take care friend.
Date: 10/25/2020 1:11:00 PM
- I love this song, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/25/2020 2:03:00 PM
Hi. thank you so much. so glad you enjoyed it. have a great week. take care. x
Date: 10/25/2020 12:47:00 PM
WoW! Peter, You have penned some heartfelt lyrics. I found it very romantic as well. Love was flowing in abundance in this write. Deep content as well. The lines“ And made my inner child wanna grow up and be a man” tugged at the heartstrings. I would to hear this set to music. I hope your day is going well my friend:-) Alexis
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/25/2020 2:06:00 PM
Alexis my dear friend. you are so kind and caring. I much appreciate your kindness and support. have a great week thank you.
Date: 10/25/2020 11:37:00 AM
was a loner window shopping Without a penny to buy Many a night all alone Drank till my bottles were dry Too many pretenders I was just a stepping stone... Love these lines.. A lovely romantic song, we all need someone like this in our lives...
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/25/2020 2:07:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it. much appreciated. could do with a little edit. but thank you so much. hope you are ok. have a great week.
Date: 10/25/2020 11:17:00 AM
aww what a super love song peter , the 5th stanza made me have a lump in my throat, a poem of hope with a fairytale ending, I would love to hear it set to music:-) hugs Jan xx
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/25/2020 2:09:00 PM
Hi Jan. hope you are keeping well. thank you so much. much appreciated. great to see you around have a great week. Pete. x

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