My Fondest Memory

As kids, my friends and I wandered through the forest.
We weren't searching for wild-berries or squirrels to chase;
a spirit of adventure was guiding us in between places
the sun rays didn't reach properly, like two hundred meters below,
from the ocean's surface.
As the sun set in the horizon, we had already reached
our homes; clothes filled with leaves and dirt,
and our eyes radiating with curiosity;
it's as though the sun had carried with it mysteries
that blossomed to wonders.
We had found our true selves in places adults would
cry out for help, imagining the dread that follows
darkness of the night in  a thick forest.
Thrill of hearing eerie sounds and breaking twigs
made us thrilled to be alive.


Date of Entry: 08/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Y. Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you so much for your warm applause, and continuous morale support!! *^_^*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Back to wish you congrats.
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:16 AM
Thank you so much, Janis!! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:37 PM
what wonderful memories Teddy thanks for letting me go on this journey into the forest with you:-) congrats on your win :-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Welcome, Jan!! *^_^* Thank you for reading, enjoying, and applauding my work!! *^_^*
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 12:36 PM
I understand this completely, it's a wonderful memory.. Congratulations
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thank you so much Darren, for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Wishing all the best for you in the contest. Interesting places to play. Great imagery in the lines.
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Hi Janis. Thank you so much for enjoying and commenting on my piece!! *^_^*
Haikutwinkle Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 4:00 AM
Hi there, Teddy, hope you are well. Great write on this theme ;) wishing you all the best!
Kimathi Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 3:05 AM
Hi Angeline. Yes, I'm doing good!! ;-) Thank you for enjoying my poem!! *^_^* Blessings to you!!!
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