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My Fondest Memory

As kids, my friends and I wandered through the forest. We weren't searching for wild-berries or squirrels to chase; a spirit of adventure was guiding us in between places the sun rays didn't reach properly, like two hundred meters below, from the ocean's surface. As the sun set in the horizon, we had already reached our homes; clothes filled with leaves and dirt, and our eyes radiating with curiosity; it's as though the sun had carried with it mysteries that blossomed to wonders. We had found our true selves in places adults would cry out for help, imagining the dread that follows darkness of the night in a thick forest. Thrill of hearing eerie sounds and breaking twigs made us thrilled to be alive. Date of Entry: 08/12/2016

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Date: 12/14/2016 3:45:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/15/2016 2:27:00 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you so much for your warm applause, and continuous morale support!! *^_^*
Date: 12/14/2016 2:53:00 PM
Back to wish you congrats.
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Date: 12/15/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janis!! *^_^*
Date: 12/14/2016 2:37:00 PM
what wonderful memories Teddy thanks for letting me go on this journey into the forest with you:-) congrats on your win :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2016 2:15:00 AM
Welcome, Jan!! *^_^* Thank you for reading, enjoying, and applauding my work!! *^_^*
Date: 12/14/2016 12:36:00 PM
I understand this completely, it's a wonderful memory.. Congratulations
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/15/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Darren, for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 12/12/2016 2:31:00 PM
Wishing all the best for you in the contest. Interesting places to play. Great imagery in the lines.
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Date: 12/15/2016 2:04:00 AM
Hi Janis. Thank you so much for enjoying and commenting on my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 12/9/2016 4:00:00 AM
Hi there, Teddy, hope you are well. Great write on this theme ;) wishing you all the best!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/12/2016 3:05:00 AM
Hi Angeline. Yes, I'm doing good!! ;-) Thank you for enjoying my poem!! *^_^* Blessings to you!!!

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