Jean Murray Poet Couplet

My Fondest Memory

My fondest memory is of your birth my love.
We fit together like hand in glove.

I wanted you so badly I cannot tell.
Your love took me from my living hell.

Although you could not communicate.
I read your mind, make no mistake.

I felt your love through your touch.
Never knew that I could love so much.

Having you has made my life complete.
Although you've left me now to find your feet.

Goodbye my child, my precious pet.
My soul's delighted your soul I've met.

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Line Gauthier January 7, 2018 at 9:21 PM Lovely poem, Jean. Congrats on your win. Jean Murray January 8, 2018 at 5:05 AM My precious pet is now half way through her Masters in American literature in Dublin, running a temperature of 38.6 as we speak from this Aussie flu which has invaded our shores. She gets the bus home shortly and I will bring all my nursing and mothering skills to bear in making her well again. Thank you as always for your lovely comments Line.

Jan Allison December 14, 2016 at 2:35 PM such an emotional write Jean I know you write from the heart and reading your comments gave me a huge lump in my throat, I hope you share these memories with Rena:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray December 14, 2016 at 2:42 PM I did Jan and she sent a sweet reply. She is in her final year of a degree in English and Sociology in University College Dublin. So, I now have an informed critic to deal with. Of course that makes her sweet responses all the sweeter.

Darren White December 14, 2016 at 12:30 PM So much love, and so much almost hidden pain.... Congratulations. Jean Murray December 14, 2016 at 1:54 PM Thank you for seeing what was almost there Darren.

Tim Smith December 7, 2016 at 8:33 PM Beautiful poem showcasing your love for your girls. Jean Murray December 7, 2016 at 8:40 PM A beautiful comment to awaken me from my slumber Tim. I left my tablet turned on. I must remember to swallow it next time. Nightie nite.

Ilene Bauer December 7, 2016 at 6:46 PM very touching, jean! Jean Murray December 7, 2016 at 7:15 PM Thank you Ilene for calling in.

Daniel Turner December 7, 2016 at 5:03 PM This is a beautiful mother's poem, Jean. Good luck! Jean Murray December 7, 2016 at 5:17 PM My girls taught me how to love unconditionally Daniel. I am blessed.