Saba Khan Poet Kyrielle

My Flag

Shining star above,you see
Shine..you're the reason of my glee
Shine...even it's all black
My Pride...You..O my Flag 

Solider there at the border 
Hasn't sent the money order
Family Proudly sees on his body,your tag
My Pride...You..O My Flag 

Fly high my Green and White
Do all u can to keep it at the very height
And If it falls you should be there to drag
My Pride..You..O My Flag

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Harry Horsman August 12, 2014 at 11:19 AM love the passion the pride....

Richard Lamoureux August 6, 2014 at 9:19 AM It is important to have love and pride for your country. You have expressed yours very well as well as your angst.

David Williams July 24, 2014 at 1:49 PM Saba an honest poem eloquently told...David Saba Khan July 25, 2014 at 2:55 AM Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Nette Onclaud July 22, 2014 at 3:42 PM your loyalty to a nation defines this piece, saba..well done!.. huggs Saba Khan July 23, 2014 at 4:33 AM Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Sara Kendrick July 22, 2014 at 1:10 PM I can feel the patriotism of your country in your lines..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the review of my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara Saba Khan July 23, 2014 at 4:34 AM Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2014 at 5:09 PM This one is so interesting. I took it for the last part to be about money, the worship of money. Did I get that right? (or is this seriously about a flag that is colored green and white, sorry, I was thinking from american standpoint and maybe I misinterpreted the meaning). Saba Khan July 22, 2014 at 6:59 AM No Andrea..it is about Pakistani flag..we're not having good time for couple of years but we'll overcome I.A i know..last lines says that everybody should play his part to keep this flag high! I know how hard our army is doing at the borders specially when you've neighbors like india and afghanistan you need to be alert all the time.I hope you understand now. Thank you for your comment

Rev. Elizabeth Anderson July 21, 2014 at 7:00 AM Our RED, WHITE AND BLUE also brings pride. So many have died to keep her flying. Blessings. Saba Khan July 22, 2014 at 6:52 AM p.s We're all with you,Elizabeth trust me Saba Khan July 22, 2014 at 6:24 AM Yes Elizabeth..I'm praying hard for them..Here,green and white symbolizes a Pakistani flag,where I belong to..Thank you for your lovely comment :)