My Flag

Shining star above,you see Shine..you're the reason of my glee Shine...even it's all black My Pride...You..O my Flag Solider there at the border Hasn't sent the money order Family Proudly sees on his body,your tag My Pride...You..O My Flag Fly high my Green and White Do all u can to keep it at the very height And If it falls you should be there to drag My Pride..You..O My Flag

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/12/2014 11:19:00 AM

love the passion the pride....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2014 9:19:00 AM

It is important to have love and pride for your country. You have expressed yours very well as well as your angst.

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2014 1:49:00 PM

Saba an honest poem eloquently told...David

Saba Khan
Date: 7/25/2014 2:55:00 AM

Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/22/2014 3:42:00 PM

your loyalty to a nation defines this piece, saba..well done!.. huggs

Saba Khan
Date: 7/23/2014 4:33:00 AM

Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2014 1:10:00 PM

I can feel the patriotism of your country in your lines..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the review of my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Saba Khan
Date: 7/23/2014 4:34:00 AM

Thank you for your visit..Have a good day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2014 5:09:00 PM

This one is so interesting. I took it for the last part to be about money, the worship of money. Did I get that right? (or is this seriously about a flag that is colored green and white, sorry, I was thinking from american standpoint and maybe I misinterpreted the meaning).

Saba Khan
Date: 7/22/2014 6:59:00 AM

No Andrea..it is about Pakistani flag..we're not having good time for couple of years but we'll overcome I.A i know..last lines says that everybody should play his part to keep this flag high! I know how hard our army is doing at the borders specially when you've neighbors like india and afghanistan you need to be alert all the time.I hope you understand now. Thank you for your comment

Rev. Elizabeth Anderson

Date: 7/21/2014 7:00:00 AM

Our RED, WHITE AND BLUE also brings pride. So many have died to keep her flying. Blessings.

Saba Khan
Date: 7/22/2014 6:52:00 AM

p.s We're all with you,Elizabeth trust me

Saba Khan
Date: 7/22/2014 6:24:00 AM

Yes Elizabeth..I'm praying hard for them..Here,green and white symbolizes a Pakistani flag,where I belong to..Thank you for your lovely comment :)