My First Smile

On my first day,
When I opened my eyes,
I saw another two eyes,
They were looking at me, 
I were frightened to see her,
And started to weep.

My eyes were twinkling in brightness,
Her features were bold,
When she touched me,
My body shrinked in her cold hands,
I were feared and I pissed,
And started to weep.

She laid me down on a soft place,
I climbed with warm body,
She fed me something warm,
I fell asleep,
When I saw two eyes again,
I were smiling on them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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April 22, 2009 at 2:39 PM
rough being born aye? try my Birth Days Light & Love
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