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My First Poem

as i sit and vegitate
watching our minds disenigrate
we pretend we are there,while we are not
slowly watching each other rot
as we look to reality 
we turn around what do we see
if satan ever takes his toll
we shall blow him away, with our rock and roll

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/11/2020 4:38:00 PM
You just can’t keep a good rock n roller down. Like this lots, Lorraine. Weird this... in the background I’ve got music tv on... as I read this, starship came on singing ‘We built this city (on rock and roll)’... spooky.
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