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my first poem

as i sit and vegitate watching our minds disenigrate we pretend we are there,while we are not slowly watching each other rot as we look to reality we turn around what do we see if satan ever takes his toll we shall blow him away, with our rock and roll

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Date: 11/11/2020 4:38:00 PM
You just can’t keep a good rock n roller down. Like this lots, Lorraine. Weird this... in the background I’ve got music tv on... as I read this, starship came on singing ‘We built this city (on rock and roll)’... spooky.
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