My First Love At First Sight

Her eyes captured
Angels flew by
Persuading my soul

Almond shaped
Delicately demure
My heart gasped

Seductively lost
Breaching my spirit
She fulfilled my passion.


written by
Cecil Hickman


written for
Sponsor Michael J. Falotico 
Contest Name "Eyes First Meet" contest ******** 3 Senryu's only
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 9:06 AM
a beautiful write, enjoyed it
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 11:33 AM
I love the way you see the angels passing by as your eyes meet, Cecil. A very passionate poem that should do well in Michael's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 10:43 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest, Cecil
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