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My First Love

The stars were twinkling in the sky The moon sat on his throne on high The breeze was whispering to the palms That night I first held you In my arms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/26/2014 11:34:00 PM
MICHAEL, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/23/2014 11:39:00 AM
Romance galore in this short and powerful love poem...I loved it Michael...Great write :) Ana
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Date: 12/23/2014 3:33:00 AM
Beautifully penned.That night I first held you....ha nice.Regards dear poet Ward. -Safa
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:55:00 AM
Michael...you've got me flummoxed here !! :)
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