My First Love

The stars were twinkling in the sky
The moon sat on his throne on high
The breeze was whispering to the palms
That night I first held you
In my arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 11:34 PM
MICHAEL, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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December 23, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Romance galore in this short and powerful love poem...I loved it Michael...Great write :) Ana
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December 23, 2014 at 3:33 AM
Beautifully penned.That night I first held you....ha nice.Regards dear poet Ward. -Safa
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April 11, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Michael...you've got me flummoxed here !! :)
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