My First Love

Here alone with nothing to call 
my own with tears from 
yesterday baby with did I do 
and what did I say to make you 
leave me this way

My heart don't beat as fast as 
the drums why can't you 
refresh my memories bring 
back the light and that touch 
that kept me alive and ready 

I miss when you wake me up 
with just one kiss stearing me 
in my eyes like I was your feast 
and least a year take it all 
the way back when we first had 
sex damn boy I was surprize 
on the way you headle my 
thighs pull me closer and softly 
came inside

My first love and my first time 
making grown up love it was 
fun better then a walk in the 
park holding hands I wish I can 
repeat it again because I can't 
stop thinking about the first 
time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Semeniuk Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 8:16 AM
niice write!..thanks for your kind words on my poetry!
Nutter Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 3:17 AM
The first time is sometimes the best time, nice read. One small criticism, proof read before publishing.
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