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My First Kiss

Our first kiss was very awkward and fast it didn't take my breath away at all. 7-16-19 Alexis Y *My muse is a bit cranky today. This is all she would give me.

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/12/2019 10:30:00 AM

It comes with inexperience, Alexis, and should improve with time and practice. Thanks for enjoying my sample of a clerihew. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2019 4:28:00 PM

oh I love this. I felt the same about MINE!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2019 3:31:00 PM

No beating around the bush here, Alexis :) Maybe not an enjoyable kiss, but certainly an enjoyable Monoku!! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/18/2019 3:40:00 PM

Hi Alexis, an innocent, cute monoku - love the honesty! Hugs and blessing my friend, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/18/2019 3:37:00 PM

LOL...My first kiss was at age 13. I thought I had sex (lol). Love this Alexis :)

John Gondolf

Date: 7/18/2019 2:18:00 PM

Mime was much the same yet still very memorable... John

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/18/2019 7:56:00 AM

Hi Jeanne: Better the last kiss at sunset than the first kiss at sunrise. My compliments!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/18/2019 5:36:00 AM

Do not worry dearest, Alexis about the first kiss the... last one is that counts! haha. The Muse is always generous my dearest friend! It is only us who do not pay attention to her whispers! Lol!