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My First Kiss

Our first kiss was very awkward and fast
it didn't take my breath away at all.








7-16-19
Alexis Y

*My muse is a bit cranky today. This is all she would give me.

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Maurice Rigoler

August 12, 2019 at 10:30 AM

It comes with inexperience, Alexis, and should improve with time and practice. Thanks for enjoying my sample of a clerihew. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2019 at 4:28 PM

oh I love this. I felt the same about MINE!

Paul Callus

July 19, 2019 at 3:31 PM

No beating around the bush here, Alexis :) Maybe not an enjoyable kiss, but certainly an enjoyable Monoku!! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

July 18, 2019 at 3:40 PM

Hi Alexis, an innocent, cute monoku - love the honesty! Hugs and blessing my friend, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

July 18, 2019 at 3:37 PM

LOL...My first kiss was at age 13. I thought I had sex (lol). Love this Alexis :)

John Gondolf

July 18, 2019 at 2:18 PM

Mime was much the same yet still very memorable... John

Ralph Sergi

July 18, 2019 at 7:56 AM

Hi Jeanne: Better the last kiss at sunset than the first kiss at sunrise. My compliments!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 18, 2019 at 5:36 AM

Do not worry dearest, Alexis about the first kiss the... last one is that counts! haha. The Muse is always generous my dearest friend! It is only us who do not pay attention to her whispers! Lol!