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My first Haiku

I sometimes wonder,
What life is really about?
Then it dawns on me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/4/2014 1:18:00 PM
yeah,,,wonderful write,,,you nailed it
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/8/2016 1:54:00 PM
Apologies for such a late reply, I don't know how I missed your response. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
Date: 11/20/2013 4:29:00 PM
Lovely how life appears after wondering and dwelling on it for so long. Great first haiku...... SKAT
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 11/21/2013 6:36:00 PM
Hi thanks for the encouragement in my attempt at Haiku. Thank you for writing a nice comment.
Date: 7/11/2013 1:59:00 PM
- Nice "first" Haiku, Seosamh ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 7/12/2013 4:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 7/9/2013 11:51:00 AM
to be continued.......... for sure!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 7/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
Thank you....I really hope so :)
Date: 5/22/2013 1:33:00 PM
See! Now that wasn't so difficult, was it?... Great first effort. You're gettin' the hang of it.... Well done.... Jake
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/22/2013 1:40:00 PM
Hi and thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 5/20/2013 7:33:00 PM
Part of life is about great poetry like this one...thanks
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for reading and your very kind words.
Date: 5/13/2013 2:02:00 PM
We all wonder! When we understand it is somehow a little bit late, unless... Beautiful and deep!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/13/2013 5:56:00 PM
Thank you again Demetrios for taking the time to read my poems, I enjoy and admire your poems so much.
Date: 5/2/2013 9:31:00 PM
I like your first haiku, Seosamh~ i like the way life is ready to wake you up every day... well at least that is the image i pick up in your haiku... enjoyed~ Linda
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/6/2013 1:23:00 PM
Hi Linda and thank you for nice comment. I look forward to try and improve on this style.
Date: 5/1/2013 8:58:00 PM
haiku has a way of grabbing you....you will write more, i am certain... great last line!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/6/2013 1:21:00 PM
Hi, thanks for reading and comment. I know I have a lot to improve on this style but looking forward to the challenge.