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My First Haiku

I sometimes wonder,
What life is really about?
Then it dawns on me.

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Richard Palmer

April 4, 2014 at 1:18 PM

yeah,,,wonderful write,,,you nailed it

Seosamh De Burca

May 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM

Apologies for such a late reply, I don't know how I missed your response. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

Skat A

November 20, 2013 at 4:29 PM

Lovely how life appears after wondering and dwelling on it for so long. Great first haiku...... SKAT

Seosamh De Burca

November 21, 2013 at 6:36 PM

Hi thanks for the encouragement in my attempt at Haiku. Thank you for writing a nice comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 11, 2013 at 1:59 PM

- Nice "first" Haiku, Seosamh ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Seosamh De Burca

July 12, 2013 at 4:13 PM

Thank you for your kind comment.

John Posey

May 22, 2013 at 1:33 PM

See! Now that wasn't so difficult, was it?... Great first effort. You're gettin' the hang of it.... Well done.... Jake

Seosamh De Burca

May 22, 2013 at 1:40 PM

Hi and thanks for the encouragement.

Judy Konos

May 20, 2013 at 7:33 PM

Part of life is about great poetry like this one...thanks

Seosamh De Burca

May 21, 2013 at 7:01 PM

Thank you for reading and your very kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 13, 2013 at 2:02 PM

We all wonder! When we understand it is somehow a little bit late, unless... Beautiful and deep!

Seosamh De Burca

May 13, 2013 at 5:56 PM

Thank you again Demetrios for taking the time to read my poems, I enjoy and admire your poems so much.

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2013 at 9:31 PM

I like your first haiku, Seosamh~ i like the way life is ready to wake you up every day... well at least that is the image i pick up in your haiku... enjoyed~ Linda

Seosamh De Burca

May 6, 2013 at 1:23 PM

Hi Linda and thank you for nice comment. I look forward to try and improve on this style.