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My First Haiku

God set my path in stone through the mountains, into the valleys fate forever steers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/12/2012 1:04:00 PM
It is good Leila - good work. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2012 9:59:00 AM
Keep writing...don't let this be not only your first but your last.
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Leila Hadi
Date: 10/12/2012 11:14:00 AM
Thanks :)

Book: Shattered Sighs