My First Car

My lawyer drives a Jaguar, a slim and glitzy marque. He seldom ventures near the Law, (the work's done by his clerk), buts sends in bills at Partners Rates; that avaricious shark. My Broker's Merc is spanking new; it takes his fishing rod. He, as of right, once gently slipped in shoes his father trod. All pomp and circumstance he struts, this self appointed God. Accountants' BMWs have litres by the score. Mine's filled his up with gadgetry and Wilton on the floor. And now he's had his Coat of Arms emblazoned on the door. I used to have a set of wheels, a Morris Minor van. It was a dear and much loved friend which ran and ran and ran. I polished it with tender care and was its greatest fan. Alas! It's gone to pay the bills. But why? I cannot see. All day they guff and huff and puff and then demand a fee. I do not want their 'sound advice', I want a car - for me! ~
For Carol Brown's 'First Car' Contest by Charles Clive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/26/2013 8:38:00 PM
Charles, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless the ones who fought and keep on fighting. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 5/21/2013 3:40:00 PM
Hello Clive enjoyed this featured poem that has the warmth of sentimental and rational value; as represented by your much loved Morris car..'
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Date: 5/21/2013 7:30:00 AM
i know how it feel when people working for you seam better than you. it makes you feel like they are robbing you poor and this was just a classy poem describing that feel. lovely poem
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:46:00 PM
Now this is what I call a very intelligent sounding humorous poem. GReat writing. Haven't seen you for a while!! Glad I got to see this while perusing the winners' list. Congratulations.
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for your support. It makes the struggle all the more worth while. Charles.
Date: 3/13/2012 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations Charles, well done xx
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:51:00 AM
Thank you. Charles
Date: 3/13/2012 1:09:00 PM
congrats Charles on a grand win for this exciting tale on first car luv..
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:53:00 AM
You are very kind to write. Thank you. Charles.
Date: 3/13/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:48:00 AM
Thank you. A fun competition. Charles.
Date: 3/7/2012 2:38:00 PM
Well....I can imagine that you were proud!!!Luck to you in contest Charles! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for your support. Charles.
Date: 3/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
Very nice Charles.Enjoyed the read.
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Charles Clive
Date: 3/17/2012 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Kash. Charles.
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