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My first car A great uncle of mine, those days, bought an used car, Which turned out to be such a terrible sore, Frantic, he pushed it up a hill, in front of all And, sent it down to the river below in a free fall. Not so bad was the used one I first bought Still it stretched my nerves and finances so taut Workshops at hand saved it from a similar fate Till I sold it for a song without a second thought. 4th Mar 12 S.Jagathsimhan Nair For: Carol Brown’s "My first car"contest

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Date: 3/10/2012 9:46:00 AM
lol.....enjoyed....nice write.............
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Date: 3/9/2012 11:32:00 AM
Jag,...Do you mind if I Soup Mail you some questions about this poem?..Too long for this teenie tiny lil box?...Thanks, Gwendolen ps...I think your uncle had the best sense of humor using gravity as "free gasoline"..haha...what an impressive one.
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:11:00 PM
Best wishes in the contest Jag; hope it gets you to the finish line this time..
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Date: 3/5/2012 3:59:00 AM
Nicely poem - good luck to you in contest. Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/4/2012 2:05:00 AM
jag, this is a witty and charming piece.. i could imagine the scene so wel; carol will enjoy thisl... just posted mine too; come look.. winning huggs to you! :)
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