My First Car-2
My first car
A great uncle of mine, those days, bought an used car,
Which turned out to be such a terrible sore,
Frantic, he pushed it up a hill, in front of all
And, sent it down to the river below in a free fall.
Not so bad was the used one I first bought
Still it stretched my nerves and finances so taut
Workshops at hand saved it from a similar fate
Till I sold it for a song without a second thought.
4th Mar 12
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For: Carol Brown’s "My first car"contest
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