My Final Thought

It's time to get up 
It's time to move on 
The memories were nice 
But that time is gone 

The many candles flickered 
A most beautiful light 
Then you blew the flame out
I guess it got too bright

With you I was someone 
I had never been before
Someone who was hurting
Yet was always wanting more

But this version of me
Is no longer the same. 
Goodbye poetry soup 
Goodbye Jane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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