My Fellow Traveler...

I had this feeling just today.
Had to walk outside, feel the sky
with my eyes... In This Way...

"Unlock"... okay, I said.
Love, the voice in my head.
"Come..." and a.Way it lead...

Glancing around now, to the Tree.
Are you there honey bee?
Hark! An Owl and dear, can you see?
Is the platypus still swimming, Mr.e?

"Check the date".  Check to Mate.
How can it all be just so?
A name, the game, voices flow...
with planets, stars, crystals and cars.
~So who's the pet?
Khet.... maybe. Riquochet
crazy. ;)  Strum the guitars...

wow! this is even a little bit hazy.
In the fuzz, we can see everything.
Within Love the bubbles sing,
Shuddlebug, got me by the wings.
Ping!  ~Can you fly this thing??


Whistling.WordsWing...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 8:38 AM
a classic Izzy riff! love it!! Jim
Baez Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Ping, ping. Yes I CAN! fly this thing. Lol.
Leccese Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 4:47 PM
Very different but good. The rambling works really well here. I like it.
Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 4:44 PM
You never let us down, Izzy. The tempo alone is amazing, but your sense of humor makes you one of my favorites! Thank you so much for the joyous writes you post on the Soup. Love, Carolyn
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