Murray Mahauariki Poet Sijo

My Feet

Savagely beaten, withered with time, tattered and torn feet,

inseparable are we for countless miles have we both traveled,

I stand saluting you my constantly neglected friends.


Contest: ON YOUR FEET- nette onclaud
27/01/2012
4th place
M.Mahauariki © 2012

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Nette Onclaud February 2, 2012 at 8:19 AM those feet need loving tender care.. great imagery and congrats to you for the win in my contest, murray!..:) huggs!

Kash Poet February 2, 2012 at 2:59 AM Very nice Sijo here.Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 2, 2012 at 2:38 AM Congratulations Murray I love that last line x

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2012 at 3:46 PM A TRIBUTE to the hard working feet!! Nicely done and congratulations.

Bob Quigley February 1, 2012 at 11:20 AM Sounds like it's time to sit down Murray:) Congratulations on your win. Well done

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2012 at 9:17 AM congrats Murray on another great win for this grand write .. enjoyed luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown February 1, 2012 at 5:32 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Murray. Love, Carol

Murray Mahauariki January 26, 2012 at 11:57 AM Eww why do I always find mistakes da next day??

Harry Horsman January 26, 2012 at 10:35 AM like this, awesome sijo. good luck in contest. harry. Murray Mahauariki January 26, 2012 at 11:55 AM Thank you, yeah thought I'd give it a crack, Never done this style before.