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My Feet

Savagely beaten, withered with time, tattered and torn feet, inseparable are we for countless miles have we both traveled, I stand saluting you my constantly neglected friends.
Contest: ON YOUR FEET- nette onclaud 27/01/2012 4th place M.Mahauariki © 2012

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Date: 2/2/2012 8:19:00 AM
those feet need loving tender care.. great imagery and congrats to you for the win in my contest, murray!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:59:00 AM
Very nice Sijo here.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations Murray I love that last line x
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Date: 2/1/2012 3:46:00 PM
A TRIBUTE to the hard working feet!! Nicely done and congratulations.
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:20:00 AM
Sounds like it's time to sit down Murray:) Congratulations on your win. Well done
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:17:00 AM
congrats Murray on another great win for this grand write .. enjoyed luv..
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Date: 2/1/2012 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Murray. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:57:00 AM
Eww why do I always find mistakes da next day??
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Date: 1/26/2012 10:35:00 AM
like this, awesome sijo. good luck in contest. harry.
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 1/26/2012 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, yeah thought I'd give it a crack, Never done this style before.

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