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My Feelings

I need her like plants need the sun. shes my photosynthesis just as waves pull In sand and push trash out she pulls me in and pushes bad thoughts out. shes my tidal force like the earth needs the sun to shine upon our atmosphere I need her to shine upon my soul she is my green house effect i give what i have generally as a man i bring home what i make and put roses in your hand ill build you a cabin next to running water in the forest just how you want ill give you my heart at the fullest with joy and emotion because thats all i got ill work every day and still come home with a smile on my face ill eat all the dinner you cook and your body ill praise ill lay with you and look into your eyes tell your my true love im yours and your mine i tell you with honesty that honestly you have gotten me youll one day be my wife right now heres me promising to dedicate to you my life

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Date: 2/13/2019 10:33:00 PM
Ethan, welcome to Soup. This line alone is a beautiful poem and a tribute any woman would love to have written in her honor. Perfect for this week! "ill give you my heart at the fullest with joy and emotion because thats all i got" All you have is MORE than enough!
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:15:00 PM
Hello Ethan Mcwhorter, you should read this to your special girl. She will like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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