My Feelings

I need her like plants need the sun. shes my photosynthesis 
just as waves pull In sand and push trash out she pulls me in and pushes bad thoughts out. shes my tidal force 
like the earth needs the sun to shine upon our atmosphere I need her to shine upon my soul she is my green house effect

i give what i have generally as a man 
i bring home what i make
 and put roses in your hand

ill build you a cabin next to running water 
in the forest just how you want 
ill give you my heart at the fullest with joy and emotion because thats all i got 

ill work every day and still come home with a smile on my face 
ill eat all the dinner you cook 
and your body ill praise 
ill lay with you and look into your eyes
tell your my true love 
im yours and your mine 

i tell you with honesty 
that honestly you have gotten me 
youll one day be my wife 
right now heres me promising 
to dedicate to you my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Ethan, welcome to Soup. This line alone is a beautiful poem and a tribute any woman would love to have written in her honor. Perfect for this week! "ill give you my heart at the fullest with joy and emotion because thats all i got" All you have is MORE than enough!
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Hello Ethan Mcwhorter, you should read this to your special girl. She will like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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