My Favourite Word

The first word there had to be - was BE, and that was the very first in existence
And from Genesis and Eden to Elsinore, it has had a remarkable degree of persistence

It seems that once BE had been exercised, the dam broke and words poured out as from a cornucopia. 
And verbs would soon exist in an abundance enough to carry you from here to Ethiopia

Except in the culture of youth where it appears this multitude has been reduced to the deplorable "was like"
To them I am tempted to say: "Learn some real verbs"; OR I would employ a phrasal such as
 'On-your-bike!'

The possibilities are now endless particularly if you include the phrasal
Giving us enough elan vital to at least maintain a metabolism basal

So to whoever first said BE, whether God or someone with similar propensities 
though another name or description:
I say Well done! I couldn't in my wildest dreams with a wish to create a rich life and culture, 
have produced a better prescription


20 August 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/13/2020 3:35:00 PM
Interesting and brilliant poem! Got me thinking a lot...thought-provoking, yet creatively written.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/15/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, J.W.
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Date: 4/13/2020 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD by the way!
Date: 9/3/2019 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/27/2019 6:24:00 AM
Nice Geoffrey...Congrats on POTD!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/29/2019 4:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charles.
Date: 8/24/2019 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your exceptional poem, Geoffrey. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:11:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, Susan.
Date: 8/24/2019 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on potd..
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Date: 8/24/2019 1:37:00 PM
A belated Congratulations on having this remarkable witty poem honored as POTD Geoffrey! Very deserving! : )
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:09:00 AM
Many thanks, Connie.
Date: 8/22/2019 3:29:00 PM
Such a fine piece so well written Geoffrey, Congrats on POTD as well, great stuff!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/29/2019 4:09:00 AM
Thanks for the kind response, Gordon.
Date: 8/21/2019 1:14:00 PM
Words will always Be a part of us. Congratulations Geoffrey, on Poem of the Day!! :) Brandy
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thannks for your kind words, Brandy
Date: 8/21/2019 10:51:00 AM
I'm so glad you Be you and wrote this wonderful poem...congrats on POTD.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:47:00 AM
Jeanne, you are very kind. Many Thanks.
Date: 8/21/2019 10:11:00 AM
A wonderful write,. Cingratulatiing you! Panagiota
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Date: 8/22/2019 4:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Panagiota
Date: 8/21/2019 9:55:00 AM
BEcause your you...and BEsides Congrats!! on POTD!!!...just BEautiful and I BElieve you Geoffrey lol...^WW^ :o)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous feed bacK, WW
Date: 8/21/2019 9:21:00 AM
Wild and wonderful journey of a read this be! Enjoyed! Congratulations on POTD Geoffrey! xomo
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:42:00 AM
Many thanks, Maureen
Date: 8/21/2019 7:48:00 AM
You don't think you could have...I like "elan vital" what we need...Congratulations GB a unique write indeed...All the best
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:38:00 AM
BE then HAVE. Many thanks for your feed-back, Arturo.
Date: 8/21/2019 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your great POTD :)
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Date: 8/22/2019 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi
Date: 8/21/2019 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Geoffrey on poem of the day..brilliantly done.
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Date: 8/22/2019 4:33:00 AM
Many thanks, Vijay
Date: 8/21/2019 7:00:00 AM
two bee or not to bee.....
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:33:00 AM
There’s a question!
Date: 8/21/2019 6:24:00 AM
A well deserved honor on a wonderful poem dear Geoffrey, Congratulations on your POTD....Maria Hugs
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:31:00 AM
Dear Maria, I am very gratified to receive your gracious comments. Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2019 5:36:00 AM
- Congratulations with great p.o.t.d., Geoffrey :) - ... and best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/22/2019 4:29:00 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise (Lovely name!)
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