My Favourite Word

The first word there had to be - was BE, and that was the very first in existence
And from Genesis and Eden to Elsinore, it has had a remarkable degree of persistence

It seems that once BE had been exercised, the dam broke and words poured out as from a cornucopia. 
And verbs would soon exist in an abundance enough to carry you from here to Ethiopia

Except in the culture of youth where it appears this multitude has been reduced to the deplorable "was like"
To them I am tempted to say: "Learn some real verbs"; OR I would employ a phrasal such as
 'On-your-bike!'

The possibilities are now endless particularly if you include the phrasal
Giving us enough elan vital to at least maintain a metabolism basal

So to whoever first said BE, whether God or someone with similar propensities 
though another name or description:
I say Well done! I couldn't in my wildest dreams with a wish to create a rich life and culture, 
have produced a better prescription


20 August 2019
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Breidenthal Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Interesting and brilliant poem! Got me thinking a lot...thought-provoking, yet creatively written.
Brewer Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, J.W.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on POTD by the way!
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September 3, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Congrats on POTD!
Messina Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Nice Geoffrey...Congrats on POTD!
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August 29, 2019 at 4:12 AM
Thank you very much, Charles.
Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:28 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your exceptional poem, Geoffrey. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Brewer Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, Susan.
One Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Congrats on potd..
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 1:37 PM
A belated Congratulations on having this remarkable witty poem honored as POTD Geoffrey! Very deserving! : )
Brewer Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 4:09 AM
Many thanks, Connie.
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August 22, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Such a fine piece so well written Geoffrey, Congrats on POTD as well, great stuff!
Brewer Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 4:09 AM
Thanks for the kind response, Gordon.
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Words will always Be a part of us. Congratulations Geoffrey, on Poem of the Day!! :) Brandy
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Thannks for your kind words, Brandy
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August 21, 2019 at 10:51 AM
I'm so glad you Be you and wrote this wonderful poem...congrats on POTD.
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Jeanne, you are very kind. Many Thanks.
Romios Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 10:11 AM
A wonderful write,. Cingratulatiing you! Panagiota
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:46 AM
Thank you very much, Panagiota
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:55 AM
BEcause your you...and BEsides Congrats!! on POTD!!!...just BEautiful and I BElieve you Geoffrey lol...^WW^ :o)
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Thank you so much for your generous feed bacK, WW
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August 21, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Wild and wonderful journey of a read this be! Enjoyed! Congratulations on POTD Geoffrey! xomo
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Many thanks, Maureen
Michael Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 7:48 AM
You don't think you could have...I like "elan vital" what we need...Congratulations GB a unique write indeed...All the best
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:38 AM
BE then HAVE. Many thanks for your feed-back, Arturo.
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your great POTD :)
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Thank you, Heidi
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August 21, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Congrats Geoffrey on poem of the day..brilliantly done.
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August 22, 2019 at 4:33 AM
Many thanks, Vijay
Lawless Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 7:00 AM
two bee or not to bee.....
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:33 AM
There’s a question!
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 6:24 AM
A well deserved honor on a wonderful poem dear Geoffrey, Congratulations on your POTD....Maria Hugs
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Dear Maria, I am very gratified to receive your gracious comments. Thank you.
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August 21, 2019 at 5:36 AM
- Congratulations with great p.o.t.d., Geoffrey :) - ... and best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brewer Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:29 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise (Lovely name!)
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