My Favourite Songs

I saw you across the room
You were with my best friend
Dancing to a slow song -Harvest Moon
You held her tightly in your arms
Then planted a passionate kiss
Oh Its My Party and i will cry if I want to
Cry if I want to and I did

I was deeply hurt and shocked
If You Could Read My Mind 
You would know my hurtful thoughts
Oh my heart aches so badly 
So your friend came up to me
He spoke calmly softly
He called me Blue Angel
Said he would never leave me 
Feelings he had for me was strongBlue Bayyou

Strong feelings for me
He said "Together we would go
to the BlueBayou where the 
sailboats go a float int Blue Bayou

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Date: 11/11/2021 9:10:00 PM
So nicely written; Loved the flow. God bless you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2021 10:22:00 AM
Hello Pratap Roy, I hope all is well with you. Thankyou for the lovely comment. God bless you.
Date: 7/27/2021 12:57:00 PM
Hi Darlene! I like how you integrated these songs into the poem. I liked the happy end. Revenge of the best friends!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2021 7:59:00 AM
Hello Jenifer, yes the revenge of the best friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/27/2020 5:07:00 PM
Well Darlene this one was right up my alley. I love music. Keep up the good work. Glad you liked A Narrow Path. I hope you will check out my book sometime.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2021 5:45:00 PM
Hello Camp Cab, I was going through my poems to see who commented and i cam across tis poem to see that you did . sorry I took so long. I enjoy music to. I enjoyed your poem The Narrow path. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/22/2020 11:20:00 AM
Ah, so delicate and lovely, Darlene.
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Date: 8/22/2020 11:44:00 AM
Hello Caren, you should do one withyour favourite songs. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/21/2020 8:39:00 AM
Hi Darlene - I love the way you weaved these lovely songs into your poem. My dad's favorite was Harvest Moon, I love your poem and have to fave it. well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/21/2020 10:26:00 AM
Hello Jenifer,I love Neil Young one of my favourite singers. Also Harvest Moon is my favourite song.I listen to it often. Hugs Darlene blessings. Darlene.
Date: 8/20/2020 2:21:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Such a beautiful poem using the lovely songs! I have to admit I don't know all of them, but I can see, Darlene, you have intertwined them in a brilliant and clever way! Love and hugs, Mala
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2020 3:30:00 PM
Hello Mala, these are some of my favourite songs. Thank you. This style of poetry was fun to do. Love and hugs. Darlene
Date: 8/16/2020 12:30:00 PM
A rather interesting and original piece Darlene, I love how you intertwined these lovely songs, very clever indeed , take care Blessings,Gordon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2020 4:23:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell, Hi! I picked some of my fav. songs and made a poem from it. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.Blessings Darlene
Date: 8/15/2020 8:29:00 PM
Oh! The songs that tell the tale of our youth! Very clever and sensitive the way you have woven them together here. Well done , Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2020 5:08:00 AM
Hello Geoffrey Brewer,thank you Geoggrey, This was to work on. Enjoy your day my friend.Thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 8/15/2020 8:04:00 PM
"Hats off to Larry", for taking you in his arms, Darlene, hope your best friend suffered from a "Jealous Heart" while you sailed the "Blue Bayou" with your new more sincere friend . . . ; )
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Date: 8/16/2020 5:06:00 AM
Hello Indiana Shaw,Yes hats off to Larry for taking me inot his arms.She will be jealous because i am going on the Bluebayou with Larry because he is sincere friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/15/2020 6:32:00 AM
I must be too young here. Oh my God. The only song I know here is Harvest moon. I have got homework to do now.. nice poem dear Darlene. Great day. Phred.
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Date: 8/23/2020 1:34:00 PM
Hello Darlene, I am in Uganda, kampala. I am a third year at University. I love poetry, I love to read and write. Have a nice time Darlene
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Date: 8/15/2020 11:10:00 AM
Hello Sirikye, Sirikye, Harvest Moon is also my favourite song. Okay I will call you Phred. Where do you live? What grade are you in? Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/14/2020 10:28:00 AM
A wonderful write with the old songs. They do not make them like they once did. Your story/poem is so true for many. Have a wonderful day writing away.........
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/14/2020 3:03:00 PM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, yes it is so true for so many. I have many favourite songs. Yes I will I am writing away. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/13/2020 12:08:00 PM
My Mom used to sing "Harvest Moon" while doing housework. Gotta love "If You Could Read My Mind," Darlene. You chose your songs well, though I barely remember "It's My Party." "Blue Bayou" by Ronstadt was beautiful! Very nicely done. Wishing you success in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2020 3:10:00 PM
Hello Carolyn Devonshire, I love Roy Orbinson, Neil Young. Gordon Lightfoot, but I can not recall who sang Its my Party I know it was a female singer. Ilike Shine on harvest moon. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/13/2020 12:10:00 PM
I'm talking about "Shine on Harvest Moon." Didn't know Neil Young had one called "Harvest Moon."
Date: 8/13/2020 7:51:00 AM
Harvest moon by Neil Young, i adore... if you could read my mind... Blue angel is one of Roy Orbinson that adore so much... Never leave me alone, by CSNYoung, Blue bayou, sung by Roy and so many country singers good work ! salute alkas,,, Good taste dearest of mine,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2020 10:31:00 AM
Hello Alkas Poetry,Hi! These are some of my favourite songs.I do have many favourites. Thank you Alakas. Salute Darlene What are your favourite songs?
Date: 8/12/2020 6:57:00 PM
It's my comment and I'll laugh if I want to! Great one, Darlene. Enjoyed reminiscing with you! ~ Rocking Chair Rock'n'Roller
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2020 5:43:00 AM
Hello Gershon Wolf, Yes laugh if I want to.I am so glad you enjoyed to reminiscing with me. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/12/2020 3:57:00 PM
This is great Darlene. Creative and expressive :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2020 4:22:00 PM
Hello Heidi,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend. hugs.Darlene.
Date: 8/11/2020 5:24:00 PM
This is lovely...Something I've never read of you before...another part of you...Nice...I posted the love poem I said I would write for you...enjoy it...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2020 4:45:00 AM
Hello Michael Arturo,oh I thought I would try something new.I will be reading this love poem you wrote for me. I will enjoy it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my frind.
Date: 8/10/2020 8:15:00 PM
Sweet!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2020 4:57:00 AM
Hello Kim, so glad you like this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene
Date: 8/10/2020 12:03:00 PM
Oh wow... Darlene mam... you have beautifully decorated your poem with your favorite songs.:-)And you have done a great job with this form.Enjoyed and liked it very much.I am going to FAVE this.:-)Hope your well!. Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/10/2020 12:32:00 PM
Great try Darlene mam.I liked it. Am glad that I made you Happy:-) Yes ,mam I was busy finishing pending works those were saved for the weekend. Hence couldn't login to see you;-)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2020 12:19:00 PM
Hello Deepa, so nice to see you Deepa, Yes i have done this form for the first time. I am so glad that you like this poem. A Fav. This makes me happy. Much love
Date: 8/10/2020 9:04:00 AM
You have made almost a tapestry of songs - very clever the weaving of it! Be safe my dear friend and keep safe. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2020 11:14:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, thank you Jennifer. It was fun to do You be safe to my friend. Hugs Darlene
Date: 8/9/2020 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations Darlene I never tried this form, Not sure of myself to do it. I can tell you put much work into this, It really shows.)))+++ One of your best therefore am FAVINg it! Panagiota xxvxoooo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2020 5:30:00 AM
Hello Pattie, yes I really thought it out. I am proud f this poem. Thank you for favouriting it. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Date: 8/8/2020 1:55:00 PM
You had me singing through your poem..For a young man, I got most of them...Have a nice day
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2020 4:20:00 PM
Hello Silent One,Oh - I thought you would. These are some of my favourite songs. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/8/2020 12:16:00 PM
Love how you've woven your favourite songs into your verse Darlene. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2020 4:22:00 PM
Hello Tom, Thank you. I worked very hard on this poem.Enjoy your evening my friend.
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