My Favorite Place

My favorite place is Mother Oak.
She is tall and thin-like,
has forest green leaves, 
and has light-brown bark.
I smell lunch cooking.
I hear Morther Oak talking to me.
I hear kids playing.
I hear whistles being blown.
I feel Mother Oak's smooth bark. 
I feel her soft branches.
I feel the warm wind blowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Davis Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 12:15 AM
This is a sweet and creative poem The reader can imagine being in this serene place with the imagery you created. nice job
Orozco Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:52 AM
Yes yes! So much peace can be found! I love this piece! - jeremia
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