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My Favorite Place

My favorite place is Mother Oak. She is tall and thin-like, has forest green leaves, and has light-brown bark. I smell lunch cooking. I hear Morther Oak talking to me. I hear kids playing. I hear whistles being blown. I feel Mother Oak's smooth bark. I feel her soft branches. I feel the warm wind blowing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/8/2013 12:15:00 AM
This is a sweet and creative poem The reader can imagine being in this serene place with the imagery you created. nice job
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:52:00 AM
Yes yes! So much peace can be found! I love this piece! - jeremia
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