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My Favorite Journey

We’re going on the Oasis Worlds largest cruise ship! I am getting too excited So I better get a grip! This will be cruise number nine They’ve all been loads of fun We’ve toured Mexico and the Caribbean But this should be THE one. The ship is so gigantic And offers fun things to do Like surfing, ice skating, rock climbing Just to name a few. This trip will be fantastic I know from whence I speak But the ship is so doggone big Don’t think we can see it all in just a week. We’ll be making stops in Haiti Jamaica and Cozumel, Mexico They have beautiful sites to see And lovely places to go. You can rent a catamaran for the day Or swim with the dolphins at one of the stops Ride horses along the beach Buy gifts and souvenirs at the various shops. Entertainment on board is abundant There are shows, a casino and games Name That Tune, karaoke and others I can’t remember all of the names. The food on the cruise is fantastic Although you stand to gain weight Let yourself go and enjoy it You'll find that it really is great. A cruise is very exciting I mean from beginning to end In fact I can't wait till the following year I can do it all over again! (to enter The Journey Contest)

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Date: 4/5/2010 1:55:00 PM
Great poem Ralph.....Thanx for all your comments......Larry
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:02:00 AM
hi ralph thank you for your support I am not thinking about that crazy girl I gave it to her in my faleshia vs esther now i'm done my poem was not even meant for her she started ans i finished faleshia
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:04:00 PM
Very playful, I like it!
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:41:00 AM
very nice write loved it and good luck in the contest and also thank you for all of your comments faleshia
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Date: 3/31/2010 5:50:00 AM
Good morning Ralph, I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:50:00 PM
You know, the concept of being confined to a ship for days used to seem boring to me. But you have illustrated all of the new activities that make cruises a more and more exciting choice for a vacation. I'm ready to sail...will there really be time to explore the ports? It sounds like these ships have EVERYTHING now! Fun poem, Ralph! Love, Carolyn
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