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My Father's Heart

Hearing your heartbeat, my ear on your chest moments like that I loved best For every heartbeat was special to me 'cause it meant my dad I still get to see Then I went to bed that night peacefully next door you were sleeping tight I never feared lying in that dark room knowing it will take only one shout and you'll be there soon Waking up the next day, getting out of bed I got done for work and that morning not much were said I remember your words the previous night "Leave her just now she'll be alright" A worried mom kept asking what is wrong 'Cause she didn't understand why I looked so down Off to the doctor you went that day and in hospital you had to stay I prayed to God "please just let him be okay" Hours have passed and your words got less I told myself that you'll be fine after a couple of days of rest I never prayed so hard asking Him "please please just help him God" I never stopped hoping and believing That soon with my ear on your chest I will still hear you breathing Seven days have passed, not a word from you Imagining you waking up saying "I'm fine how are you?" In the ICU lying with my ear on your chest This time only small little breathes I felt safe so close to your heart That fatherly love my favorite part Your words that previous Thursday night "Leave her just now she'll be alright" I never knew those words would be your last 'Cause a week after those words... Daddy, you've passed Lying with my ear on your chest The moments I used to love best My world came crashing down and that moment was never the same 'Cause that moment I realized that MY father's heart will never beat again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/19/2014 8:44:00 AM
Such a tragedy. I am truely sorry for your loss. But you've been here only a month and have a wonderful following for you poetry... I can understand why... You write with passion...
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Date: 11/21/2014 6:20:00 AM
The people here "my poetry sisters and misters" are amazing. I felt welcome since day one. This is a whole different world in "Soupville" lol. It became one of my favorite places to visit very quick. Thank you for your comment Carol and I am also glad to call you my poetry sister as well. Big hugs "B"
Date: 11/5/2014 8:31:00 AM
Reading this awesome poem moved me ...
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thanks again for commenting on my work and taking the time to read it. Have a lovely day "B"
Date: 10/20/2014 6:18:00 AM
Beautiful piece !
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Date: 10/20/2014 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Jerry. Have a blessed day. Warm Regards "B"
Date: 10/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
To you I give esteem and hope this brings peace. Well done Be and I hope you are more better from this piece... Verlena
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Date: 10/17/2014 4:39:00 PM
To you I give esteem and hope this brings peace. Well done Be and I hope you are more better from this piece... Verlena
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Date: 10/20/2014 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Verlena. I am much stronger. Love "B"
Date: 10/17/2014 5:53:00 AM
deeply touching beautifully penned piece bless you
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Date: 10/20/2014 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Liam. Have a Blessed day :)
Date: 10/15/2014 6:07:00 PM
Very sad and loving poem...my prayers go out to you...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Tim for your comments on two of my poems. I appreciate your thoughts and I look forward to reading your poems as well. Have a Blessed day. Warm Regards "B"
Date: 10/15/2014 12:52:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, BE - I choose your first very moving and lovely written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Only joined PoetrySoup in the week and loved it since day 1. I only started writing poems after my dad passed away 3 years ago and I love doing it ever since. He used to write poems. I love reading everyone else's poems/sharing mine. Will post something again soon and I look forward to reading your poems as well. Thank you for the warm welcome. warm Regards "B"

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