My Father

People say, it’s very difficult to reach out to their fathers,
But my father adds to the count of my cap’s feathers.

                                          More than a father-daughter,
                                          My relation with him has been more of honor.
           He would stand for me against anyone who would try to bother.
           With all his decisions for my life turning positive, 
           Sometimes I doubt: With GOD, is my father my life’s fellow author?

During our high school days,
his day would start at 4 in the mornings,
giving us the first wakeup call,
and thereafter some tactical warnings.
Preparing us morning tea,
Then drive us to tuition daily with a mission
Of giving us a future that was trouble free
Right from ironing the uniforms of his daughters number one, two and three
To growing them into girls who were allowed to argue and make their father 
agree
To making sure that he gave us values that would be as strong as roots of a 
banyan tree,
                                                                                                        
Working selflessly all knowing that he would have to let go 
and set his money making kids very soon free
Bright future of his kids is what my father always believed in                                                                                                  
and could foresee.

What my father did for us,
I can never forget,
I've got the best father on Mother Earth,
This is what I can bet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/2/2014 12:37:00 AM
It depicts your relationship with your dad beautifully ..I have read many poems on this topic dedicated to moms but not many for dads ...your dad is definitely lucky! :)
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Jagjot Kaur
Date: 7/2/2014 12:41:00 AM
Hey there, thanks for your interpretation of my poem. It reflects your beautiful mind too. Not my Dad, I'm lucky :D
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