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My Father

I miss you dad every single day
The wonderful Times I remember 
Are the times we spent together going 
To dinner and church
The times I will cherish always on this earth
Your gentle ways and smiles and hugs
Made Life worthwhile for this is true
Forever you are missed in my heart and soul
But the forever is Heaven and you are there basking
In the Light of the Lord
I miss you dad and loved you so much 
But eternity is yours to no longer hurt
Cancer is what took you far too soon
I am always remembering your hugs and 
I loved you so much too.
Eternity is there for you now and forever
Remember I love you and Kisses from here
to you in the forever they call Heaven from earth

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David Williams Date: 7/17/2012 12:01:00 PM Laurel just a quick congrats on your win..David Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/17/2012 12:10:00 PM Oh thanks so much! Have a good day. laurel

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 7/16/2012 3:26:00 PM Hi Laurel, welcome to the Soup. I love the devotion you show(to your dad) in your poem. It's really touching. Congrats! Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/16/2012 3:35:00 PM Oh thanks so much for your kind words. xoxo I appreciate it. laurel

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/16/2012 9:56:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Laurel. Love, Carol Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/16/2012 3:34:00 PM thank you so much. Have a good day ane evening too. xoxo laurel

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/16/2012 2:57:00 AM Hi Laurel, congratulations with your win,,, thank you for the support.. soup mail..pd Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/16/2012 3:34:00 PM Oh thank yhou so much. I love this site too. You are so kind. love, laurel xoxoxoxo

Matthew Anish Date: 6/13/2012 11:52:00 AM Touching Elegy I posted a elegy for my father who died a couple of years ago at the "ripe but disappointed age "of 81. You can find it on poetrysoup.com under Matthew Anish Paul's gone Best Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Peggy Caulfield Date: 5/29/2012 8:11:00 AM This is a beautiful tribute to your father, and it's very well written. I lost my own father in 2009 and I miss him greatly. Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/16/2012 3:33:00 PM thank you for your kind words.we do but they are in heaven and I am sure they are going to be friends. my dad donald bertman and yours. Dad loved to talk with people

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/21/2012 5:14:00 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Laurel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jacque Graham Date: 3/21/2012 1:17:00 AM I am so sorry that you lost your father. Poetry is such a good way to get things off your chest and your sincerity shows through your writing. I hope you will continue to pour you heart out through your writing. My best wishes to you. Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 7/17/2012 12:11:00 PM Oh thank you so much for your kind words. laurel.

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/20/2012 8:22:00 AM Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Laurel. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 AM Lovely written poem to your father, Laurel! - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply Laurel Larison Date: 3/20/2012 7:37:00 AM Thanks I just joined today. I will read some of your poetry too.. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 AM And WELCOME TO P-SOUP !!!