My Father

I miss you dad every single day
The wonderful Times I remember 
Are the times we spent together going 
To dinner and church
The times I will cherish always on this earth
Your gentle ways and smiles and hugs
Made Life worthwhile for this is true
Forever you are missed in my heart and soul
But the forever is Heaven and you are there basking
In the Light of the Lord
I miss you dad and loved you so much 
But eternity is yours to no longer hurt
Cancer is what took you far too soon
I am always remembering your hugs and 
I loved you so much too.
Eternity is there for you now and forever
Remember I love you and Kisses from here
to you in the forever they call Heaven from earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Laurel just a quick congrats on your win..David
Larison Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Oh thanks so much! Have a good day. laurel
Tsiluma Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Hi Laurel, welcome to the Soup. I love the devotion you show(to your dad) in your poem. It's really touching. Congrats!
Larison Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Oh thanks so much for your kind words. xoxo I appreciate it. laurel
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Laurel. Love, Carol
Larison Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:34 PM
thank you so much. Have a good day ane evening too. xoxo laurel
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July 16, 2012 at 2:57 AM
Hi Laurel, congratulations with your win,,, thank you for the support.. soup mail..pd
Larison Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Oh thank yhou so much. I love this site too. You are so kind. love, laurel xoxoxoxo
Anish Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Touching Elegy I posted a elegy for my father who died a couple of years ago at the "ripe but disappointed age "of 81. You can find it on poetrysoup.com under Matthew Anish Paul's gone Best Matthew Anish
Caulfield Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 8:11 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your father, and it's very well written. I lost my own father in 2009 and I miss him greatly.
Larison Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:33 PM
thank you for your kind words.we do but they are in heaven and I am sure they are going to be friends. my dad donald bertman and yours. Dad loved to talk with people
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 5:14 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Laurel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Graham Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 1:17 AM
I am so sorry that you lost your father. Poetry is such a good way to get things off your chest and your sincerity shows through your writing. I hope you will continue to pour you heart out through your writing. My best wishes to you.
Larison Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Oh thank you so much for your kind words. laurel.
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Laurel. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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March 20, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Lovely written poem to your father, Laurel! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Larison Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 7:37 AM
Thanks I just joined today. I will read some of your poetry too..
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March 20, 2012 at 7:20 AM
And WELCOME TO P-SOUP !!!
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