My Father

I miss you dad every single day
The wonderful Times I remember 
Are the times we spent together going 
To dinner and church
The times I will cherish always on this earth
Your gentle ways and smiles and hugs
Made Life worthwhile for this is true
Forever you are missed in my heart and soul
But the forever is Heaven and you are there basking
In the Light of the Lord
I miss you dad and loved you so much 
But eternity is yours to no longer hurt
Cancer is what took you far too soon
I am always remembering your hugs and 
I loved you so much too.
Eternity is there for you now and forever
Remember I love you and Kisses from here
to you in the forever they call Heaven from earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/17/2012 12:01:00 PM
Laurel just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Laurel Larison
Date: 7/17/2012 12:10:00 PM
Oh thanks so much! Have a good day. laurel
Date: 7/16/2012 3:26:00 PM
Hi Laurel, welcome to the Soup. I love the devotion you show(to your dad) in your poem. It's really touching. Congrats!
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:35:00 PM
Oh thanks so much for your kind words. xoxo I appreciate it. laurel
Date: 7/16/2012 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Laurel. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:34:00 PM
thank you so much. Have a good day ane evening too. xoxo laurel
Date: 7/16/2012 2:57:00 AM
Hi Laurel, congratulations with your win,,, thank you for the support.. soup mail..pd
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:34:00 PM
Oh thank yhou so much. I love this site too. You are so kind. love, laurel xoxoxoxo
Date: 6/13/2012 11:52:00 AM
Touching Elegy I posted a elegy for my father who died a couple of years ago at the "ripe but disappointed age "of 81. You can find it on poetrysoup.com under Matthew Anish Paul's gone Best Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/29/2012 8:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your father, and it's very well written. I lost my own father in 2009 and I miss him greatly.
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Laurel Larison
Date: 7/16/2012 3:33:00 PM
thank you for your kind words.we do but they are in heaven and I am sure they are going to be friends. my dad donald bertman and yours. Dad loved to talk with people
Date: 3/21/2012 5:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Laurel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 1:17:00 AM
I am so sorry that you lost your father. Poetry is such a good way to get things off your chest and your sincerity shows through your writing. I hope you will continue to pour you heart out through your writing. My best wishes to you.
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Laurel Larison
Date: 7/17/2012 12:11:00 PM
Oh thank you so much for your kind words. laurel.
Date: 3/20/2012 8:22:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Laurel. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 AM
Lovely written poem to your father, Laurel! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Laurel Larison
Date: 3/20/2012 7:37:00 AM
Thanks I just joined today. I will read some of your poetry too..
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 AM
And WELCOME TO P-SOUP !!!
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