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My Fantasy 3

I plan to end the fantasy mystery in this part And hopefully end up capturing her heart I guess I’ve withheld her name for far too long This unnecessary suspense is just wrong So finally I made that move that has long eluded me A smile lit her face -- and it was clear for me to see… She had been expecting this move for a very long time But my cowardice had prevented me from singing my favourite rhyme A rhyme that every woman loved and appreciated Thank God now am getting slowly acquainted And who knows she may just be the one I might take to the altar And then I can reflect and confidently say – I have come really far Unfortunately I can’t tell you her name But maybe I will – after her wild beauty I have managed to tame…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 2:52:00 AM
Beautiful Poem.I like it very much. Gidds.
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:26:00 PM
loved this poem well written, put togeter very well, you have to tell us who the girl is. thank you for reading my poem it means so much to me when some one does.
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Felix. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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