My Fantasy 1

Her name for now, I wish to conceal
And when I make my case i will reveal
Well then, I hope we have a deal

Combing the streets of the suburb, I've always thought ideal
Mostly, it helps my shattered and dejected heart to heal
Once in a while I come across this seal.....
Pardon me... I know i don't sound real

No seal will comb the streets hoping to find a meal
More importantly a seal in the streets sound surreal
But I'm only likening her beauty to that of a seal
And if its ever possible, her beauty I would wish to steal.....

To be Continued........
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Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Well done felix... Can't wait to hear more aboout this beautiful "seal"... Lay
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December 1, 2010 at 3:47 PM
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