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My Family

My family is something like the Mavericks, were a Team! Together where brighter than a Sun Beam. Our life is sweet something like ice-cream. Confidence through the ceiling, I just call that Self-Esteem Certified Brilliance, our thoughts come together and they flow like a Stream. High ambitions and Major dreams, you can call us the Dream-Team. Soon our money will hit high notes, like them Girls that Dream! * LOL! Now we are a CHAMPIONSHIP TEAM, YAY!!! Go MAVZ...

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Date: 5/7/2011 1:10:00 PM
Already thanx once more and your advice I shall explore.
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:52:00 PM
I really like the idea that your family together is brighter than a sun beam! Awesome! On your 2nd line, "where" is supposed to be "we're (as in we are). Otherwise this is an excellent write! Keep the pen going! Caroline. :)
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