My Family

My family is something like the Mavericks, were a Team!

Together where brighter than a Sun Beam.

Our life is  sweet something like ice-cream.

Confidence through the ceiling, I just call that Self-Esteem

Certified Brilliance, our thoughts come together and they flow like a Stream.

High ambitions and Major dreams, you can call us the Dream-Team.

Soon our money will hit high notes, like them Girls that Dream!













* LOL! Now we are a CHAMPIONSHIP TEAM, YAY!!! Go MAVZ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Battie Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Already thanx once more and your advice I shall explore.
Delacroix Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:52 PM
I really like the idea that your family together is brighter than a sun beam! Awesome! On your 2nd line, "where" is supposed to be "we're (as in we are). Otherwise this is an excellent write! Keep the pen going! Caroline. :)
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