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My False Angel

How was i so gullible, To have common sense i was unable. But this was my fault, My spirit crushed as a result. What was i to do, Her charm so fresh and so new. She said she was the one, To protect me from wjat i might have done. All of that is gone, What she did was false and wrong. She claimed ro be of light and hope, To believe her i wa a dope. What she did was extremely bad, She left me feeling betrayed and sad. I can repair the feelings she wrought, Yet something better was all i sought.

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Date: 12/25/2011 9:49:00 PM
Dillon, life and it's lesons, enjoyed..thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.
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