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My Fading Rose

The rose Is very delightful It makes me very insightful It has many emotions throughout my heart If It shall die I'll fall apart But even though were different colors We still have the same love for each other So as I see you start to die Thats what really makes me cry

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Catelyn Huffman

Date: 6/12/2012 7:00:00 AM

this is a really good poem... i loved it. however it seems as if many of your poems are kind of short, i'd love to see some length-lier ones especially with the way you rhyme. i'd also love it if you could check some of mine out :3

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 5/19/2009 3:09:00 PM

i loved your poem. its awesome. luv ya. :)

Juan Onate

Date: 4/9/2009 4:06:00 PM

wow great poem it is amazing hey ckeck mines would ya???????thanx and once againd this is awesome!!!!!!!!!

Anna Mayall

Date: 2/17/2009 11:12:00 AM

i love the way u ryhme.... keep going

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2009 5:56:00 PM

Christina, just like "the rose," this is a very sweet verse. I hope race issues are not the reason your love is dying; I had hoped we were beyond that type of thinking by now. Thanks for your kind words on my father's poem. Love, Carolyn

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/15/2009 1:25:00 PM

aaawww :( sweet- not sweet- sweet then you cry :( love the poem

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/13/2009 7:10:00 PM

This is very sweet and sad..reminds of dating a woman from another race..now I am heart broken again.

Maryann Guoladdle

Date: 2/13/2009 7:45:00 AM

Awwwww.... this makes me want to cry.... i like it (:

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 4:13:00 AM

Awe, nice couplet and it makes me sad when a flower withers too. Welcome to PoetrySoup, we're glad to have you. Love E.

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 2:32:00 AM

i love the rhyming! a really cute couplet! ~ Arany

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2009 9:47:00 PM

Great work Christina, nice insight and great use of imagery in this couplet. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/10/2009 9:19:00 PM

good job christina, keep writing and let your gift grow.....

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/10/2009 6:14:00 PM

This couplet captures so much. I love the flow of the rhyming. You really did an amazing job. I can't wait to read more of your work. I welcome you to POETRYSOUP where you are amongst great company and I invite you to read some of my work...Raul