Christina Vasquez Poet Couplet

My Fading Rose

The rose Is very delightful 
It makes me very insightful

It has many emotions throughout my heart
If It shall die I'll fall apart

But even though were different colors 
We still have the same love for each other

So as I see you start to die 
Thats what really makes me cry

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Catelyn Huffman June 12, 2012 at 7:00 AM this is a really good poem... i loved it. however it seems as if many of your poems are kind of short, i'd love to see some length-lier ones especially with the way you rhyme. i'd also love it if you could check some of mine out :3

Cherica Eckiwaudah May 19, 2009 at 3:09 PM i loved your poem. its awesome. luv ya. :)

Juan Onate April 9, 2009 at 4:06 PM wow great poem it is amazing hey ckeck mines would ya???????thanx and once againd this is awesome!!!!!!!!!

Anna Mayall February 17, 2009 at 11:12 AM i love the way u ryhme.... keep going

Carolyn Devonshire February 15, 2009 at 5:56 PM Christina, just like "the rose," this is a very sweet verse. I hope race issues are not the reason your love is dying; I had hoped we were beyond that type of thinking by now. Thanks for your kind words on my father's poem. Love, Carolyn

Frank F. Atanacio February 15, 2009 at 1:25 PM aaawww :( sweet- not sweet- sweet then you cry :( love the poem

Christopher Higgins February 13, 2009 at 7:10 PM This is very sweet and sad..reminds of dating a woman from another race..now I am heart broken again.

Maryann Guoladdle February 13, 2009 at 7:45 AM Awwwww.... this makes me want to cry.... i like it (:

Elizabeth Neal February 11, 2009 at 4:13 AM Awe, nice couplet and it makes me sad when a flower withers too. Welcome to PoetrySoup, we're glad to have you. Love E.

Arany P. February 11, 2009 at 2:32 AM i love the rhyming! a really cute couplet! ~ Arany

Steve Edmonds February 10, 2009 at 9:47 PM Great work Christina, nice insight and great use of imagery in this couplet. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Abe Lopez February 10, 2009 at 9:19 PM good job christina, keep writing and let your gift grow.....

Raul Moreno February 10, 2009 at 6:14 PM This couplet captures so much. I love the flow of the rhyming. You really did an amazing job. I can't wait to read more of your work. I welcome you to POETRYSOUP where you are amongst great company and I invite you to read some of my work...Raul