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My Face

Quite white really not brown as first stated, olive skin, dark eyes only what i've created Apply the bronzer, smudged charcoal lines, complete with mascara my personality defined Nothing too bad beneath, but what peoples expectations command, a prisoner, a slave to my artistic hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 8:44:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I'm new here too. Nice poem. I totally agree with what you're saying here and I can really relate to this. This reminds me of the Dove evolution commercial for some reason...
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:32:00 PM
Cosmetic Slaves Unite! I have enjoyed your poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have recently joined this community as well . Your voice will be heard! Best regards Brenda Atry
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:12:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Naomi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:05:00 PM
Interesting topic that you have penned in this one...Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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