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My Eyes Can Still Dance

I'd like to feel free,
As a bird on the wing.
Join a choir and gustily sing.
Read an exciting book,
Without being disturbed.
I could talk to myself,
Without being overheard.
Sit out in the garden,
On an old garden swing
Swinging up high,
As a bird on the wing,
Free as a bird,
That's how I would like to be,
Young and unencumbered,
Not ancient like me.
I am old now,
Have I lost my chance?
Certainly not, My EYES CAN
STILL DANCE?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mccann Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Wonderful poem, Shirley. I, too, am at the stage where my eyes are about the only thing I can move without wincing! This leads me into a closer look at your work. Keep safe. Elizabeth
Hawkins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth. The joys of old age. Take care. Shirley
Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:12 PM
Just GREAT! 'My eyes can still dance!' You are jumping for joy (in my mind!) Love it, Shirley. Write on! :) gw
Hawkins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, Gershon
Leffanta Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 11:19 AM
My first German girlfriend had eyes that danced when she was happy! What a lovely sight to behold! Aloha!
Hawkins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:49 PM
G'day, Rico, There is nothing fake about dancing eyes.
Tor Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Love this Shirley. love your spirit and your resolve. God bless you...
Hawkins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:52 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment and your blessing. God bless you.
M  Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 12:10 AM
Truly Beautiful Shirley! Debx
Hawkins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:54 PM
Aw! thank you, Deb! ShirleyXX
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