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My Epitaph

when my time draws near remember the path I penned through forests, valleys ancient yearnings of peace, love and faith forgive my frailties and follow your light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 3:59:00 AM
~~~BRAVO JAMES~~~ I love where your heart is. The path to the light we should all follow. Outstanding writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 10:24:00 PM
here is the light:)--well penned--charma
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Date: 8/26/2009 7:06:00 PM
I share the same prayer... so nicely done, James. ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:03:00 PM
That is a very nice epitapth, jimbo? The imagery is beautiful and illustrates the path you have penned. Thank you for sharing and thank you for the very nice comments you have given me on my poetry. Caroline.
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:00:00 PM
I hope for you , not for a while, tho good advice "follow your light", the path you've penned is a clear one. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:33:00 PM
Nice form on this piece...your time is a long way off brother man..you have a lot more poetry to write.
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Date: 8/26/2009 3:57:00 PM
Interesting thougthts put to pen. Don't let it draw near soon. Keep writing. Sara
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