My Epitaph

when my time
              draws near

remember the path 
              I penned

through forests, valleys
              
ancient yearnings of
             peace, love and faith

forgive my frailties

             and

                 follow

                     your 

                           light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 3:59 AM
~~~BRAVO JAMES~~~ I love where your heart is. The path to the light we should all follow. Outstanding writing. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 10:24 PM
here is the light:)--well penned--charma
Richards Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 7:06 PM
I share the same prayer... so nicely done, James. ~ Carrie
Delacroix Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:03 PM
That is a very nice epitapth, jimbo? The imagery is beautiful and illustrates the path you have penned. Thank you for sharing and thank you for the very nice comments you have given me on my poetry. Caroline.
Freeman Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:00 PM
I hope for you , not for a while, tho good advice "follow your light", the path you've penned is a clear one. Sincerely Moses
Higgins Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Nice form on this piece...your time is a long way off brother man..you have a lot more poetry to write.
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Interesting thougthts put to pen. Don't let it draw near soon. Keep writing. Sara
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