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My Egyptian Goddess

I'm writing my feelings 
down for you on a scroll 
my loyalty for you shall be 
foretold using the strength 
of my love to put you up on 
a pedestal your love to me 
is divine and terrestrial 
overwhelmed by your 
salacious force I start to 
lose myself to your warm 
embrace with no remorse I 
am now forever yours 
Presence so Flawless love 
so true she's my Egyptian 
Goddess. 

You Bathe in Milk and 
crimson rose petals your 
elegance embraced by rare 
stones and precious metals 
Aura so divine I'm 
abducted by your love feels 
like I'm losing track of time 
observing your every move 
in anticipation waiting on 
your requests I'm here to 
offer you my love and 
services prepared to do 
everything to prove my 
loyalty to my precious 
Egyptian Goddess. 

As You slowly nibble 
kisses to my neck 
paralyzing me with 
immediate effect got me 
stunned by your beauty 
such true art my 
undeniable counter part 
together we will experience 
an immortal love secured 
beneath the Fool Moon 
above Stars creating a 
romantic ambiance our 
love shines in the dark 
magical sparks howling 
passion making our mark 
you worth my worship and 
praise yet so modest but 
without her I'm lost she's 
my Egyptian Goddess.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

May 6, 2014 at 6:23 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Bruce

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 5, 2014 at 12:58 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Bruce :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

May 3, 2014 at 12:22 AM

Bruce, beautiful, and loving it for a first soup poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Bruce Rittze`

May 3, 2014 at 2:19 AM

Thank you so much Linda

Skat A

May 2, 2014 at 11:41 PM

Hi Bruce, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Bruce Rittze`

May 3, 2014 at 2:21 AM

Thank you Skat, I really appreciate it!