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My Egyptian Goddess

I'm writing my feelings down for you on a scroll my loyalty for you shall be foretold using the strength of my love to put you up on a pedestal your love to me is divine and terrestrial overwhelmed by your salacious force I start to lose myself to your warm embrace with no remorse I am now forever yours Presence so Flawless love so true she's my Egyptian Goddess. You Bathe in Milk and crimson rose petals your elegance embraced by rare stones and precious metals Aura so divine I'm abducted by your love feels like I'm losing track of time observing your every move in anticipation waiting on your requests I'm here to offer you my love and services prepared to do everything to prove my loyalty to my precious Egyptian Goddess. As You slowly nibble kisses to my neck paralyzing me with immediate effect got me stunned by your beauty such true art my undeniable counter part together we will experience an immortal love secured beneath the Fool Moon above Stars creating a romantic ambiance our love shines in the dark magical sparks howling passion making our mark you worth my worship and praise yet so modest but without her I'm lost she's my Egyptian Goddess.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Bruce
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:58:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Bruce :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:22:00 AM
Bruce, beautiful, and loving it for a first soup poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Bruce Rittze`
Date: 5/3/2014 2:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 5/2/2014 11:41:00 PM
Hi Bruce, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Bruce Rittze`
Date: 5/3/2014 2:21:00 AM
Thank you Skat, I really appreciate it!
Date: 5/2/2014 6:46:00 AM
Romantic indeed! I enjoyed reading this :)
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Bruce Rittze`
Date: 5/2/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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