My Drunken Pen

Oh,no!not again,my book is in a mess.vomits of inks all over my notes.
My pen is drunk again.Stench!,stench of vomits everywhere.As it wobbles
from line one to line four...No!no matter what I must finish this piece,so
that I can have peace.I`m writing a Sedoka to  a wonderful damsel and....
the ground is spinning,I`m feeling very dizzy; Hiccups.....hic...cups this is 
frustrating,oh! it`s not me,it`s my pen....then I travel to the world of 
extreme bliss where I`m married to a princess in a golden castle....
with plenty cattle...the sky is blue as the flowers bloom and the stars
 are  sparkling;Oh,yes!I`ve been here before~the apex of glory...
cool cosy water fall touching my head....De ja vu ~~de ja vu....inks
dripping on my feet...Ha!my pen~~I jerk back to life....thick inks flow
out of my drunken pen forming a sea of water on my notes.Oh!smell
of whisky fills the air.......my Sedoka is ruin.Ha!my princess in the Ca..
cas..tle..;Wha..t  an illusion..Staggering..waggling...rambling, my pen
moves along.........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 12/23/2015 1:08:00 AM
Hi Olusegun. The imagery and drama in you verse is amazing! You must have taken a lot of time and meditation to do it..... Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/22/2015 3:28:00 PM
Olusegun, Congrats on your win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/8/2013 8:06:00 PM
Olusegun, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 12/2/2013 4:45:00 PM
Nice one. Drunken pen indeed.
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Olusegun
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Olusegun !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:52:00 PM
Always a good read, my friend!! Congratulations on a very fine win! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/28/2013 4:01:00 PM
Congrats, Olusegun. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/27/2013 10:07:00 PM
Olusegun,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:21:00 PM
Respect to a great poet!..found a great poet after williams shakespeare,whose pen is migthier than a warriors spear!..i pay homage..
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:56:00 AM
What a lovely poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem. And amen to your prayer about our country. Truly, the Lord is our Shepherd we shall not want. May God lead the nation and deliver the land from the marauding beasts in power. Nigeria ko ni fonka o.
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:06:00 PM
lol, enjoyed this witty write - Congrats on your wins : )
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