My Dreamland

A place in the middle of nowhere, I wish to be in, where I could still
Breathe the blissful pure fresh air of the bucolic, where I
Could hear the hum of silence harmonious to my mind’s rhythm, where
Dew drops of serenity sparkle in a peasant’s land in morn’s rays, where
Eyes yearn to catch a glimpse of the beauty of the soul than the beauty of the  
Face, where I do not need a mirror to see if I look okay and I 
Get to be accepted as I am and not compared with anyone, where the 
Harvest hope of a farmer is not shattered by cyclones and floods, where
I could hear the throb of silence and pen my ponderings in peace, where
Jealousy or hypocrisy or anxiety or grief ceases to exist, where 
Knots of hindrances for growth untangle themselves with ease, where
Language of love is the only medium of communication, where the 	
Melodious songs of birds are heard throughout the year as
Nature is never reluctant to flourish in Her full glory here, where the
Oppressed are not cast out from society like corners of bread, where 
Perceptions of my muse are ignited to get answers to all my deep baffling
Queries on life, where disabilities of people are not made fun of, where 
Rays of the rising sun, forever, gives the warmth of hope, where my
Soul revels in ‘the now’, cares descend, and mind is at ease, where
Thoughtless, I can remain in this unknown, unnamed land, where
Unspoken words of truth echo more than spoken words of lie, 
Voices, muted, of the innocent get more chances to be heard, and
Whimpers and sighs of pain are never heard. Such an idyllic 
Xanadu is my dreamland, where I do not have to worry about
Yesterday, today, or tomorrow and could reach a
Zen state of mind that will soothe my being.

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Date: 4/24/2024 10:26:00 PM
I keep looking for a poem to comment on but maybe I have seen them all? Can't wait till you get into the swing of things again
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Date: 12/19/2023 11:47:00 AM
Wonderfully composed song of your desire to experience the bliss of "Xanadu," Ani, to remain in its arms. So happy to see you posting again. Have missed you! Sending you blessings of serene joy and congratulations!
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Date: 12/16/2023 11:12:00 AM
Lovely idea for the contest Anitha.. you have some lovely lines here.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/17/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thank you so much dear S1 for the inspiration to write another Abecedarian... Enjoyed writing... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 12/15/2023 10:42:00 AM
"My Dreamland" is a wonderful Abecedarian write. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day  writing away.....................
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Date: 12/10/2023 10:23:00 AM
Wow you did an incredible job here, Ani. I thought it would be difficult, but for me the words flowed just as they did for you. Yours makes much better use of imagery than my simple poem in this form. I bet you will score high.
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Date: 12/9/2023 10:43:00 PM
Gosh, dear poetess it feels so good to see you posting and wow, this is such an evocative and heartfelt poem that I think will resonate with the wishes of many souls.We all want to experience the zephyr of such a heaven when all the adversities fade into illusions and the realities of happiness come alive. I loveee your wordplay here especially"Eyes yearn to catch a glimpse of the beauty of the soul than the beauty of the, Face, where I do not need a mirror to see if I look okay and I" Beautiful
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/10/2023 2:53:00 AM
Awwn, yes life can really bring other priorities first but, I hope your are doing okay dear, we all missed reading your words!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2023 11:06:00 PM
Dear sweet Hiya, thank you so very much for your kind words of appreciation on my scribble. Due to some other personal commitments, I could not actively post poems here, though I love being on here. I wish to be active here atleast through my comments in the coming days. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/9/2023 10:44:00 PM
Best of luck for the contest too!! :)
Date: 12/9/2023 3:27:00 PM
This is so relatable and it's what Iong for too. Only I believe in the reality of it rather than the fantasy or dream. There is a new world on the horizon where justice will reign supreme and all suffering will be forever eliminated, right here on earth!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2023 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much Tom for the visit and comment. Am glad you could relate to this. Just a little scribble for the contest about a place I long to belong. God bless..~ Ani.
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